The Book Bag: Poetic Voices – September Takeover Special

Welcome to this month’s special edition of Poetic Voices, featuring several of the members of Write Here, Right Now poetry writing group.

Write Here, Right Now holds a special place in my heart. Thanks to the group, my work has improved vastly over the past year and a bit. It’s even more gratifying to see members flourish in their own writing projects.

The group meets on Thursday evenings every 6 weeks or so via zoom and is formatted to help poets on their WiPs or spark new ideas through prompts and feedback. A challenging and thoughtful prompt is given at the start of the session followed by time to work on WIP with the creative part of the brain already engaged followed by time for poets to read pieces and gain constructive feedback from the the group. We also have a WhatsApp community where members can share more.

If you’d like to know more, reach out on Social Media.

This is the first takeover featuring several members who are sharing a poem, recommending a poet to read and offering some writing advice.

This month I am proud to share the voices of;

GP Hyde
Jenevieve Carlyn
Leia Butler
Merril D. Smith
Penny Dedman
Andrew Williamson


GP Hyde was born on the Wirral and now lives in Grimsby, North East Lincolnshire, UK. He studied fine art at Goldsmith’s College and at the Royal Academy Schools. He has worked in theatres, art centres and community arts as a performer, writer and production manager for 14 years before working as a lecturer and senior manager in creative arts for 25 years.

His fiction has been extensively published by Pure Slush. His poetry has been published by Broken Spine, Black Bough Press, Underbelly Press, Hedgehog Press, voidspacezine, the Dark Poets, Bent Key, Lincs & Ink, Underbelly, the Starbeck Orion and Full House Literary.

He has been nominated for a Best of the Net award and longlisted for the Bath Novella-in-Flash award. His radio drama ‘Michael and John go to England’ was longlisted for the BBC’s Alfred Bradley Prize.

Links:
Phil has published a pamphlet A Gracious Month, available Amazon at A Gracious Month: Amazon.co.uk: Hyde, G.P.: 9798715707567: Books

He reviews books at (3) GP Hyde’s Book Reviews | Substack

Social Media:
@gphydeauthor

Writing Advice:

It’s all about application – apply backside to chair and fingers to keyboard.

Poetry Recommendation:

John Hollander’s Rhyme’s Reason, a guide to English verse – Yale University Press Fourth Edition 2014


Jenevieve Carlyn is a poet and historical writer in New England. Her poems have been published or are forthcoming in The Examined LifeParabolaRiver Heron’s “Poems, for Now,” Sage Magazine from Yale’s School of the Environment, The Madrid ReviewRelief, and elsewhere, including the anthology In the Garden: Community Storytelling on Food, Ecology, & Place (Torrey House Press).

She won the 2023 Thomas Merton Prize in Poetry of the Sacred and the Connecticut Poet Laureate Award for Eco-Poetry, was a finalist for Palette Poetry’s 2025 Love & Eros Prize, was shortlisted in the Artemesia Arts Contest, and highly commended in Mist & Mountain’s Competition on the 2025 theme of Peace.

Links:
website: jenevievecarlyn.com

Social Media:
Bluesky: @coastalpoet
Substack: @coastalpoet
IG: @coastal_poet

Writing Advice:

Whether on the page or in everyday life, let yourself move between silence and self-expression. They both have something to offer.

Poetry Recommendation:

An American Sunrise by Joy Harjo. When my mind feels distracted or I am lost in abstraction, the immediacy of Joy Harjo’s poetry brings me back to sensory engagement. Words come alive again.


Leia Butler is a writer and creator from London. Her poetry can be found in Streetcake Magazine, Permeable Barrier, Atrium, Aswirl, Fawn Press, The Unwhispered Legacy Anthology, and After Poetry.

She has poetry collections published with Broken Sleep BooksStanchion, and Steel Incisors.

She is the editor of Full House Literary.

Links:
website: https://leiabutler.com/

Writing Advice:

It’s always worth experimenting and playing around with your language, form, and spacing. Even if you have a few different variations, you might discover something special! 

Poetry Recommendation: One of the first poets I read was Nikki Dudley, who is an amazing champion for experimental and bold writing. Her poetry is incredible and has forever shaped the way I write. 


Merril D. Smith is a Pushcart and Best of the Net nominated poet. Her second collection, Held Inside the Folds of Time (Jane’s Studio Press) was published in 2025.

Her first full-length poetry collection, River Ghosts (Nightingale & Sparrow Press) was Black Bough Poetry’s December 2022 Book of the Month. 

 She writes from southern New Jersey.

Links:
website: merrildsmith.org
Held Inside the Folds of Time: https://a.co/d/01WJhVTA
Merril’s Publisher https://www.janecornwell.co.uk/janesstudiopress-poetry

Social Media:
Bluesky: @merrildsmith.bsky.social;
IG: mdsmithnj

Writing Advice:

I think it’s very important to read widely and to interact with other poets/writers to see how they approach topics, forms, syntax, vocabulary, and space on a page simply to open your own mind to possibilities.

Poetry Recommendation:

 I can’t speak for everyone, but I return again and again to Sarah Connor’s work. I wrote the book blurb for her Always Fire, her final book, published by Sidhe Press.  ” . . .the poems sneak up on you, gently grazing your skin and grasping your heart.”


Penny Dedman lives in Edmonton Green with 2 cats 3 Masdevallias and 6 Pungas.

Poems published: Broken Spine’s ‘Glow’ anthology 2025, Urban Tree Festival poetry 2022, Fresher Publishing’s ‘Waves of Change’ and ‘Glean and Graft’ 2021. Artemesia shortlisted 2023, Bridport longlisted 2021 and ’22. … and there’s something coming which I can’t mention yet!

Links: 
https://thebrokenspine.co.uk/product/glow-cityatnight/

Social Media
Bluesky: @spanishtom.bsky.social
IG: @pennydedman
Substack currently under construction!

Writing Advice:

Even poems have internal logic.

Poetry Recommendation:

Bex Hainsworth – in particular  ‘Walrussey’. (published by Black Cat poetry press)


Andrew Williamson’s writing crosses emotional geographies, drawing on relationships, coastlines, landscapes and cities.

From Aotearoa New Zealand and based in the Isle of Skye, he has published three collections, the latest, Through Salt-Heavy Seas, in 2025. His work has appeared in journals and anthologies in Aotearoa, the UK and the US.

Links:
Projects: https://urbanbadgercollective.com  

Social Media:
Bluesky: @andywilliamson.com
IG: @drandywilliamson

Writing Advice:

Don’t be afraid to delete your favourite word/line/stanza.

Poetry Recommendation:

People should be reading Glenn Colquhoun (https://www.glenncolquhoun.net)


Thanks for reading, another takeover is coming in early 2027!

The Book Bag: Anthology II – Concealed Revelations

Welcome. On the back of the success of Unwhispered Legacy, I thought it would be worthwhile to create a second PDF anthology, again raising much needed funds for Médecins Sans Frontières.

This time, I am happy to announce that my guest editor is Leia Butler of Full House Literary.

There are no rules on theme and form for this edition however it would be worthwhile for you to read Full House Literary, edited by Leia and The Book Bag and The Book Bag: Poetic Voices, my blog that features emerging and established poets including Pascale Petit, Rishi Dastidar, Rhian Elizabeth, Carson Wolfe, Rebecca Goss and more.


Submissions

***The submission window will be open from 1st – 30th November 2026***

***Submissions Are Free***

***Accepting Poetry & Prose***

This time, submissions will be collected via a Google form which requires a google account. You will be required to provide basic details, a 20-word bio, confirmation that you have read the guidelines. You will also be required to upload your poems on a single doc or docx document.

Poets can submit upto 2 pieces in total.

***Submit Here***

All poems must be in Times New Roman font size 11, with left alignment unless specifically shaped for the purpose of the piece. Poems should not exceed 30 lines or 200 words.

Please do not submit work that contains extreme graphic depictions of violence of any kind.

The Book Bag is an inclusive platform therefore any pieces containing bigotry, hate or discrimination of any kind will not be accepted.

No AI or Plagiarised Poetry please.

Please do not submit simultaneous submissions.

If you are unable to use the google form, please send your submission to the email address: thebookbagsubmissions@gmail.com.

On occasion, editorial suggestions may be made.

All decisions are final.

Copyright remains with the poet.

You will be notified of acceptance no later than 31st January 2027.

Submissions are free. This is not a paid opportunity, however poems will be considered for nominations to the Pushcart, Best Of The Net & Forward prizes.

This is a PDF Anthology which will be downloadable via this website. A new fundraising link will be shared on day of publication and be sent with contributor copies.


If your work is printed elsewhere following publication, any mention of Concealed Revelations would be greatly appreciated.

If you have any questions please drop me a message on social media.


We can’t wait to read your pieces. Send us your best. Remember to submit between 1st & 30th November.

Paul & Leia

The Book Bag: Poetic Voices – August 2026

Welcome to August’s Poetic Voice, a poet who I have had the pleasure of meeting in Wales, once upon a time in Neath. They are somebody whose work is always full of soul and energy, often associated with deep time, and I have been lucky to write a small blurb for their recently released book with Black Bough Poetry. They are an exceptional writer and an even more exceptional person.

Without further ado, I’m thrilled to announce the Poetic Voice for August 2026 is the tremendous Polly Oliver.

Polly Oliver (she, her) is a writer based near Mumbles in Wales where she lives with her husband and two teenage sons. Although born and bred in Cornwall, she has some roots in Wales and has lived there since she studied literature and cultural theory at Cardiff University at the tail end of the 90s. She is learning Welsh and could never live far from the sea.

Polly has been writing poetry since discovering the poetry community on social media and attending local open mics.

Polly has had a career in radio news and communications, and is inspired by other people’s stories, legends in landscape and coast, and geological and personal time.

Polly is sharing work from her book Edges of Our Days, published by Black Bough Poetry (2026) available to buy here . Polly has also been kind to do a small Q & A to give some insight into her inspirations behind her writing. If you’d like to attend the live launch of Polly’s collection, it is taking place in Mumbles on 8th August at Harry’s Bar. Check Black Bough Poetry on social media for more information.

The first piece from Polly is a blend of myth and place which delivers a real sense of presence.

The next poem has a companion piece in Polly’s collection. It deals with the shifting landscapes as travellers move across Wales into England and the stories they offer.


More poems will be shared on 15th August, why not take time to read the below Q & A to learn more on Polly and her inspiration and some tips.


PS: A nice, easy one to begin. Who are your poetic influences?

PO: In spite of doing an English Literature degree at Cardiff with Creative Writing modules, I have to be honest here and say couldn’t really say that any of the poetry content made me sit down and read or write poetry when I was in my teens and 20s.

At that age the faint hint of cringe hung about my early efforts which I was churning out to meet deadlines rather than being genuinely invested, and reading out our work to the group half-killed me with shame! Back then poetry just felt a bit like an annoyingly oblique way of getting things across! It kind of followed that I became a journalist straight afterwards, and “show don’t tell” was not going to work in a two-minute radio bulletin.

In fact, I think the poetry that was more influential on the way that I thought, saw or heard the poetic was the stuff I encountered in earlier childhood. I have written elsewhere about how in a pre-YouTube world the books and their illustrations that surrounded us as kids were more impactful on our psyche than they perhaps might be in an era when multiple creative forms and media such as gaming, short form social media content, and vastly more film and TV options are available to young minds. Not to mention the possibilities thrown up by AI.

In early childhood there were one or two poems that stuck. I remember an anthology we had with beautiful illustrations called Time’s Delights. Looking back, it was probably all very white and canonical, but it included “To a fat lady seen from the train” by Frances Cornford. Its strange sensual details, indefinable emotion and discomfiting repetition stuck with me:

O why do you walk through the fields in gloves,
Missing so much and so much?
O fat white woman whom nobody loves,
Why do you walk through the fields in gloves,
When the grass is soft as the breast of doves
And shivering sweet to the touch?
O why do you walk through the fields in gloves,
Missing so much and so much?

The anthology also included “Fog” by Carl Sandberg, and I was haunted by the “little cat feet”; so deft, so striking.

On the subject of haunting, I loved Walter de la Mare’s “The Listeners” too and I still try and bring the unsettling, otherworldly and unanswered into some of my poems. The story which leaves more questions and a sense of something darker!

I honestly can’t remember when or why the switch flicked and I started writing poems. Motherhood perhaps? Or something dreadful like love! Anyhow, it was a while before I took the plunge and started going to local Swansea open mics such as Howl, Talisman and the brilliantly raw-edged, hilarious and sometimes heartbreaking Drunk Poets Society in Port Talbot.

Hearing poems and spoken word aloud is so important to developing the musicality of your own work, especially in Wales where the expressive turn of phrase is everywhere and the real language of Wales is pure music.

That was how encountered Matthew M.C Smith whose cosmic and geological vision and powerfully original images made his themes of memory, landscape, longing and time -themes that I am also drawn to – hum.

Then there was the pandemic, and Skype, Zoom etc exploded into default usage, allowing poets from opposite sides of the globe to read live to one another. Magical in a way.

Via Matthew and Black Bough initially, I tuned into a warm, welcoming and incredibly inspiring online poetry community, largely based on Twitter, but now I’m really only on Instagram (only for reasons of keeping things together instead of being scattered). Social media levels the playing fields and opens doors for poets who may find it hard to access traditional ways of developing their voice and style. There are so many poets out there now, producing amazing work and more importantly cheering each other on.

PS: How would you describe your poetry writing process from the grain of idea to completing a piece?

PO: That can really vary and the “grains” come in different ways. Sometimes it can be a response to an impression from nature, and a phrase or image might tap itself into my brain in time with my steps. I also continually find myself turning snippets of overheard conversations or people watching into full-on storylines that might form the germ of a later poem.

Obviously, any story or character peeping out of the lines bears no relation to the person or scene that inspired it. I also think a lot of poets have trouble with people mistaking the “I” or the “you, she or he” in poems as relating to the writer personally in a way novelists don’t. When a lot of us are just telling stories we have made up!

I’ve never been great with routine, and I do need to re-establish one, but when I have managed an extended spell of journalling – not every day as that’s unrealistic – I will give some time to a kind of automatic writing where I just go for it on the page. For around ten minutes (it’s quite hard to sustain a flow state for more than that) I will just write with no self-editing and no self-consciousness. Scraps from within those jottings do give rise to quite a lot of poems I’ve written.

It might be months before I revisit them but something like a social media prompt in the online poetry community or another trigger will see me build on those earlier lines and images.

I used to be a little light on the editing but the process of refining Edges of Our Days kicked on by Matt Smith at Black Bough’s unflinching approach when it comes to questioning your self-indulgent or unconscious use of “poety” fall-back words has made me actually savour this part of writing a lot more.

PS: Can you tell me what the inspiration or event that made you write this Edges of Our Days?

PO: I’d say Edges of Our Days was more of an evolution than an event. It sounds strange now that the pieces seem so natural together in a kind of loosely linked progression, but I was never writing with a “collection” in mind. Instead, I was producing individual pieces sometimes for a prompt or event, often just because the poem was there to be written.

Then there was a manuscript competition for Black Bough. I was among several winners who would see their books published, but mine was the last or next to last of many, including anthologies. This meant I had a lot of time to create new material, develop my ideas, refine my style and start to pick out the golden threads tying some of the work together that I could tease out for readers.

PS: If Edges of Our Days could leave readers with one main feeling, what would you want it to be?

PO: I absolutely love this question! Its kind of difficult because Edges has three distinct parts (actually four if you count the “bonus tracks”) which all have a different quality.

I think I’d have to do that poet-y thing of conjoining words to create new nuance. I would like readers to feel a sort of “haunted tenderness”. Towards the earth in its youth and age, towards the people they observe and share their lives with, and to tune into the impossibly sweet bright moments that pass like cloud shadows.

PS: After finishing the book, who else should readers be checking out?

PO: So many! This is a tricky one because of all the amazing poets I see practically daily on socials and on sites like Poetic Voices.

So, I’m going to limit myself to just four because the list would be a very, very long one otherwise:

Regine Ebner is a writer with an almost shamanistic ability to conjure the light and ancient power of the desert landscape she lives and loves in, using beautiful palettes and spare but resonant phrasing with quietly powerful precision. “Mountains that see in the Dark” is movingly beautiful. Regine Ebner’s collection | Black Bough poetry

Helen Laycock’s poetry is filled with movement and joie de vivre alongside a compassionate warmth for all beings in life or death that make her words conjure colour and life, while being breathtakingly crafted. “Elemental” is a glorious collection.

Sumptuous and deeply sensual yet transcendental is how I’d describe the poetry of Indian writer Saraswati Nagpal whose collection “Drench me in Silver” is as luxurious as it sounds. The writing is finely tuned to the rhythms of the earth and ancient sacred systems of belief and philosophy as well as how history is tied to her personal roots.

Locally, watch out for a collection coming soon with Black Bough from the gorgeous Guinevere Clarke whose work has a beautiful feminine sensuality and a warm humour that suddenly sparks and startles. You can read more from Guinevere here: Guinevere Clark – author, poet, dancer

PS: And finally, what is one piece of advice you would give to writers who are in the thick of writing a manuscript?

PO: Stay fluid. Don’t have too much of a fixed idea of what the final collection might look like, or cling too tightly to a theme or I think you could be in danger of strangling your own creativity slightly.

I would suggest instead building a pile of potential “tracks for inclusion in final album” that is bigger than you think you might need. When it comes to the process of curating those poems into an order that gives your manuscript its life force, the ones you might left on the cutting room floor might end up being the stars of the show.


Welcome back to Polly’s Poetic Voice Feature. Three more pieces have been added that highlight Polly’s skill in creating emotionally resonant and powerful work.

The following poem from Edges of Our Days is physical piece relating to Spring. This is Green Fist.

Poem four is a highly personal and heart-wrenching observation from Polly. It really resonated with me and will do with many people. I appreciate the opportunity to share this.

And finally, a reflective piece that examines emotion, disassociation and how the course of a life can change in an instant.

A big thank you to Polly for letting me share these pieces throughout the month. Full details on buying a copy can be found here.

Take it easy and make time for yourself.

Paul

The Book Bag: Coin Laundry At Midnight by Carson Wolfe

Welcome back to The Book Bag. I hope you’ve had a poetic week.


What a busy week and what for the most part sunny week. Good weather can make the worst days a bit brighter. However, when it’s humid and muggy, I am not a fan. Most other countries are set up to deal with that but sadly new builds in Northern England are not! I must say we did have some fantastic thunder and lightning storms too.

Allotmenting has been good this week. The wildlife camera has picked up a few different animals but it’s been yet to pick up a stoat (there are plenty around). We’ve harvested the first strawberries, some more beans, some new potatoes too.

Poetry-wise, I attended an online workshop hosted by Nikita Gill as part of Lyra Poetry Festival. I have the start of some promising pieces from the event. I think it was the most poets I had seen at any workshop I have attended online! I graciously accepted a couple of really neat opportunities for this year and next. I also wrote a bit just for fun.

This week, I’ve been reading;

Coin Laundry At Midnight

  • Poet: Carson Wolfe
  • Press: Button Poetry

If you remember back to Carson’s Poetic Voice feature, you’ll know I was looking forward to their book Coin Laundry at Midnight. During my time off from The Book Bag, I ordered myself a copy and here we are today, me having read it a few times this week (including at the allotment) having been fascinated by the poems that deal with adult themes throughout.

One of Carson’s key powers in this chapbook is their ability to pack poems with dark humour and slight unease. This is highlighted in ‘Raw Food Retreat’, ‘Ghazal For Women Drivers’ and one of my favourites ‘What Women On The Road Taught Me About Finances’ where the pieces have real undercurrents.

Excerpt

Coin Laundry makes excellent use of pop culture to explore themes on a range of subjects including identity. ‘I Take My Midwestern Penpal to A Gay Bar’ and ‘I Rank Places By How Much They Charge for Pringles’ (one of my favourites) are just two examples of this.

Excerpt

Carson explores relationships in different guises throughout the book with brutal honesty and genuine tension. ‘Wig’ looks at a transactional relationship whereas ‘Welcome To Your First Thanksgiving’ examines multiple dynamics including paternal, maternal and friendships.

For those who love a book that experiments with form and style, you will love this book. White space is played with in ‘Porno’, there’s justification in the piece ‘Live Fast Die Young Bad Girls Do It Well’. The poem ‘Haikus From The Departure Lounge’ is a great inclusion and one of my favourites. I also was blown away by the Jack Kerouac sequence.  

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This is a book for readers who appreciate dark humour, adult themes, danger and authenticity in the poetry they digest. Those who appreciate variances on form and style will love this chapbook. Every poem is a banger and I highly, highly recommend it. Fascinating and so sharp.

Favourite Poem:

I’ve already mentioned I Rank Places By How Much They Charge for Pringles’, What Women On The Road Taught Me About Finances’ and Haikus From The Departure Lounge’. I could add eery other piece but let’s go with another five as I write. ‘Strange Baby’, ‘Feelmore, Oakland’, ‘A Quantum Physicist Teaches Me The Observer Effect’, ‘Ode To The Hippies Who Saved Me’ and the very dark ‘Geography’.

You can buy Coin Laundry at Midnight here for UK, here for US.

Learn more about Carson here.

This week’s playlist is an eclectic one…

Destiny’s Child – Say My Name
Jack Johnson – Better Together
Salt ‘n’ Pepa – Let’s Talk About Sex
Frank Ocean – Super Rich Kids
Electric Six – Gay Bar
Queen – I Want To Break Free
Hozier – Cherry Wine
Dolly Parton – 9 to 5
The Weeknd – Often
Peaches – F*ck The Pain Away
Iggy Pop – Lust For Life


Before I Go…

Tickets for the Book Bag Open Mic Session 6 are going fast. Grab them here while you can.

One More Thing…

There’s only a few more days until the Frazzled Lit Short Story competition closes. Full entry details here.        

And Finally…

Congratulations to Polly Oliver whose first collection was released this week by Black Bough Poetry. Polly is an incredible poet and I’m looking forward to reading the book!


Next Weeks Read

Title: The New Carthaginians
Poet: Nick Makoha


Take it easy and stay poetic, I’ll catch you next week.

Paul

The Book Bag: The Lives We Had Before by Vanessa Napolitano

Welcome back to The Book Bag. I hope you’ve had a poetic week.


Well I’ve been mega busy since I last caught up up with you.

I had an interview at work for a permanent position in another team. And guess what… I got it. The competition was tough and I thought I was nerve free – then the nerves hit at a minute before the interview started. So happy I prepared, it was a massive help.

Mrs S & I celebrated our 16th wedding anniversary with a few nights away in Harrogate. We visited RHS Harlow Carr and had a look around the library there. The poetry section was limited but I did read Dwell by Simon Armitage. Insect Hotel is a riot of a poem. We also spent time recharging.

The allotment is now in full flourish and we’ve been harvesting some of the ready produce including broad beans, garlic, herbs and onions. We used some to make a Chimichurri sauce to have with meat, fish and veggies and also made a broad bean hummus to dip into.

Poetry-wise I hosted another Book Bag Open Mic where the standard was remarkable. I’ve also attended a Black Bough open mic, blurbed for some excellent poets and I’ve been writing and working on some new projects. Also on Thursday it was another Write Here, Right Now. I have a poem that is almost finished. I’ve also got a couple of projects on the go, one of which was announced on social media on Saturday.

On top of that, I’ve been reading;

The Lives We Had Before

  • Poet: Vanessa Napolitano
  • Press: Stanchion Press

I have been a fan of Vanessa’s work since I first saw a piece shared on social media when I was making my first foray into poetry. I also heard her read and was inspired by the relatable, accessible and authentic nature of her poetry. I also attended a workshop she hosted earlier this year which game me a couple of great poems. Vanessa is a supportive and incredible member of the poetry community with tremendous talent.

Authenticity is one of Vanessa’s greatest powers as a poet. The pieces ‘Navigating’ (one of my favourites) and ‘7:04 To Manchester’  are vivid and immediately recognisable.

The emotional connection in the poems dealing with relationships including ‘Grandad’, ‘For Your Horse To Come In’ and ‘Man In The Leather Hat’ made me pause and take stock after reading. The poems where Vanessa directly addresses her father are exceptionally moving through conversational use.

Vanessa’s sense of fun is apparent throughout the book. ‘Escargot’ (another of my favourites) is a deliciously humorous piece. The poem ‘Mix Tape, 1997’ (another of my favourites) is super and made me smile.

Excerpt from Mix Tape, 1997

There is also a palpable danger in some of the pieces in the book. ‘A List Exercise’, and ‘We Let the Wolf Hunt in The Local Woods,’ are two key examples containing menace. I read both aloud and the amplification compared to reading in my head made me more uncomfortable.

This book will appeal to poetics who appreciate work grounded in reality. The collection is accessible and relatable and those readers who want a genuine emotional connection will feel right at home in the pages of this book. A treat of a collection to welcome back The Book Bag. You should buy a copy, it’s fantastic.

Favourite Poem:

I’ve already mentioned ‘Navigating’, ‘Escargot’ and ‘Mix Tape, 1997’   so I’ll add another eight here. ‘Moorwalk’, ‘Creeper’, ‘Birthday Poem’, ‘Your Goth Garden’, ‘Pork Chop’, The Tasting Menu’, ‘Corking’ and ‘The Lives We Had Before’.

Learn more about Vanessa here.

Buy The Lives We Had Before here.

This week’s playlist is a blend of genres, with some of the songs named in the collection too;

Kate Bush – Running Up That Hill
Taylor Swift – Lover
Embrace – Gravity
The Stan Tracey Quartet – Under Milk Wood
Emma-Jean Thackray featuring Wiki – Golden Green
Kaiser Chiefs – Ruby
Courtney Pine – I’m Still Waiting
Florence & The Machine – What The Water Gave Me
Bob Dylan – Tangled Up In Blue
Gordon Lightfoot – Sundown


Before I Go…
Tickets are available for The Book Bag Open Mic Session 6. Sunday 26th July, 7-9pm. Get them while you can here.

One More Thing…
Have you caught up with this month’s Book Bag Poetic Voices feature? Echoes from the first year of this feature, it includes my favourites from the series. Read it here.

And Another…
Are you a Short Story writer looking for a great competition to enter? Frazzled Lit’s 2026 Short Story Award is currently open with the formidable Donal Ryan. Closing date is 30th June. Full details here.


And Finally…
On 11th July, Rachel Turney of Poetry (in Brief) and recent Poetic Voice is hosting the online launch of the inaugural issue. Check out EVENTS — TURNEY TALKS for details.


Next Week’s Read

  • Title: Coin Laundry At Midnight
  • Poet: Carson Wolfe

Take it easy and stay poetic, I’ll catch you next week.

Paul

The Book Bag: Poetic Voices – Echoes From The Past Year

Welcome to The Book Bag Poetic Voices. As this month marks the first year anniversary of the Poetic Voices feature, I thought I’d do a small retrospective and share of one poem per poet from the past year.

Echoes if you will.

To say I am delighted how the first year has gone would be an understatement. Reading, sharing and nominating poems to be recognised has been a massive highlight for me. The fact that I have been able to spotlight poetry icons who have been so kind and forthcoming with their work has been an absolute joy. The variety of work has been broad but the quality has been consistently excellent. My thanks go to all those who have trusted me with their work from poets to presses and everyone in between.

In June, I featured Matthew MC Smith as the inaugural Poetic Voice. I am sharing this poem from his feature, which was also nominated for a Forward prize.

In August 2025, I was thrilled to celebrate and share pages from A Hobby of Mine by one of my poetry heroes Rishi Dastidar (available here). This is from page 9. The book is a list poem, underpinned by subversive humour.

In September I was honoured to spotlight work from Beast by the tremendously talented and kind icon of poetry Pascale Petit. The following piece is The Lammergeier Daughter. You can buy Beast from Bloodaxe Books here.

I’ve ordered Carson Wolfe’s latest book and will be reading it for my regular Book Bag series soon. I was chuffed to have a selection of poems from Carson in October. I am re-sharing this piece which was first published in the Best New Poets Anthology 2024. This is While Wishing She Was Dancing To Kate Bush.

Back in November, I was delighted to share work by the excellent Rebecca Goss from her incredible collection Latch (available here). It is a masterclass on place and identity. I selected Weir as the echo from Rebecca’s feature.

In December, I shared work from Sculling by Sophie Dumont (available here). One of the main themes in Sculling is how one can live on through a selfless act of organ donation by saving others. Because of this, I wanted to raise some awareness for Organ Donation, which is a vital service that can help save lives. In the UK, information can be accessed here: https://www.organdonation.nhs.uk/.

In February, I was lucky to be able to share some original work from the jocular and charming Paul Connolly. One of his pieces, I nominated for a Forward prize, which I am echoing today, I am always struck by Paul’s use of language.

In March, I shared original work from the exemplary Vikki C which resulted in a Forward nomination for her poem Morningfall. So, yes you guessed it…

In April, I was elated to be able to share work from #MOTH by Eleanor Holmes (available here) and an original piece of writing. #MOTH is a stunning book and I highly recommend people buy a copy, it is exquisitely produced. For Eleanor’s echo, I am sharing one of my favourites from the book…

And that brings us to our most recent Poetic Voice, the enigmatic and super busy Rachel Turney who shared original work and pieces from Retired Wannabe Club Kid (available here). Her original pieces were After poems of my work. My ego isn’t that big to share one of those even though they are fantastic. I am echoing this piece which warmed my heart…

So there we have it. If you haven’t read all the Poetic Voices, you can find them here. I can’t wait to share more Poetic Voices from July.

Stay tuned…

There’s lots more to come.

Stay Poetic & Be Kind

Paul

The Book Bag: Drawn by Peter Hughes

Welcome back to The Book Bag. I hope you’ve had a poetic week.


Well, it has certainly been a week. I don’t think I’ve stopped at work, and I am looking forward to my break coming up.

My writing has suffered this week. I wrote in response to two prompts, one of which was a late entry to Fragments Friday and the other was an allotment poem influenced by William Carlos Williams. I got a lovely rejection for a scheme that I made the shortlist for and their comments, feedback and encouragement was really valuable. Making the shortlist of anything is a triumph in itself

The allotment is flourishing. We now have flowers on tomato plants and the strawberries are forming. Broad Beans are present. BROAD BEANS!!! There’s also some currants (type as yet to be determined) forming on one of the rescued plants.

On top of that I’ve been reading;

Drawn

  • Poet: Peter Hughes
  • Press: Broken Sleep Books

I don’t know why but this was my first time reading Peter Hughes. Drawn is a collection of poetry and artwork that has a real sense of being alive. This is in no small part due to Hughes’ expert use of language to create vivid authentic scenery, that is full of movement. Pieces including ‘Ogwen’ and ‘RE:LODE 40’ are perfect examples of this. Two of my favourites in the collection ‘Drawn’ and ‘Periplo: A Prelude’ also showcase this.

Excerpt of Drawn

There is joy and humour in this book which was much needed this week. ‘For Simon Smith’s Birthday’ (one of my favourites), is excellent and the following poem, ‘Let’s Dantz’ (part of a wider collaboration project) is tremendous fun, full of international locations and pop culture references.

Excerpt of Let’s Dantz

Those poetics who love a book with variations on form and style will not be disappointed. ‘After Lentini’ is a prose piece and after piece in one go, there is also the hybrid nature of the collection featuring interesting and terrific artwork by Hughes and Lisa Santana Hudson (in ‘Drawn’). The ‘RE:LODE’ sequence of poems uses a variety of formatting including use of space to draw the reader through the poems.

This is a collection that will appeal to lovers of hybrid collections, poetics who enjoy poetry with a real vibrancy that is grounded and relatable. Fans of language and style will love this book too. It has made me want to explore more of Hughes’ work, which I will do on my upcoming break. This is a marvel of a book.

Buy Drawn from Broken Sleep Books, here.

Favourite Poem:

I’ve already mentioned ‘Drawn’, ‘Periplo: A Prelude’, ‘For Simon Smith’s Birthday’, and I will mention another five that spring to mind as I’m writing this. ‘RE:LODE 32’, ‘Skoda’, ‘RE:LODE 34’,  ‘RE:LODE 54’ and ‘RE:LODE 52’.

Oh, you want a playlist? Here we go for this week’s diverse blend of music that I think goes well with Drawn, we have:

Andrea Bocelli – Con Te Partirò
Elton John – Mona Lisas and Mad Hatters
Gipsy Kings – Bamboléo
Joni Mitchell – Both Sides Now
Peter Gabriel – Solsbury Hill
The Stranglers – Golden Brown
Giuni Russo – Alghero
Cesária Évora – Sodade
Françoise Hardy -Le Temps De L’Amour
Kate Bush – Moments of Pleasure
Radiohead – Street Spirit (Fade Out)
The Three Tenors – Nessun Dorma


Before I Go…
Tickets are still available for Wednesday’s Book Bag Open Mic Session. Tickets and details here. It’s an encouraging and supportive space to share your work, whether it be a polished gem or a roughcut coal.


One More Thing…
I have a poem in ‘These Poems Kill Fascists’ the latest and final Like A Blot From The Blue anthology from Fin Hall that can be bought here. The poetry contained in the pages should be read, heard and shared.


And Another…
If you’ve been keeping up to date with me on Instagram, you’ll know that the inaugural issue of Poetry (in Brief) magazine has been released and I have a poem in there. Read the issue here which features outstanding poetry from an international lineup of poets.


And Finally…
The Book Bag is taking a couple of weeks break as I enjoy some time away to celebrate our anniversary. The next instalment will be June 21st.


Take it easy and stay poetic, I’ll catch you soon

Paul

The Book Bag: Chasms by Carmella de Keyser

Welcome back to The Book Bag. I hope you’ve had a poetic week.


It’s been a quieter week but I’ve still been working on lots of exciting projects with more information being shared soon.

I was delighted to add the second part to Rachel Turney’s feature which included poems from her latest book and a banging dance music playlist to accompany Retired Wannabe Club Kid. Catch up here.

I submitted a couple of poems and had both accepted which was an excellent feeling as this one was a poem I worked on at Write Here, Right Now Writing Group.

Saturday night we had our annual Sangria and Tapas Eurovision party. No bingo card this year.

At the allotment, more radishes have been harvested, tomatoes have been planted into their final spots and it looks like we may get some currants and berries this summer. The broad beans are I’ll probably use them in a jam maybe or a compote. It’s not all been plain sailing, our sunflowers have again been decimated by snails.

On top of that, I’ve been reading;

Chasms

  • Poet: Carmella de Keyser
  • Press: Alien Buddha Press

Yes, we have a returning poet this week in The Book Bag. As soon as I knew Carmella’s latest pamphlet Chasms was coming out, I wanted to read it. And I am so glad I have.

The title of the book announces the main theme of the poems within as readers tread the gaps between past and present, dark and light. This is terrifically done in one of my favourite pieces, ‘Nana’s Card Games’, a poem that uses sensory detail to great effect. ‘Chasms’ opens the collection with defiance and a step into light.

Carmella’s trademark emotionally connecting poetry is evident throughout. The authenticity of pieces including the harrowing ‘Have You Forgotten’ and ‘Mother’s Violin’ is incredibly captivating and thoughtful.

Again, Carmella’s use of imagery creates vivid scenery that draws and grounds readers. The poems including ‘Neighbourhood Eclipse’ and ‘A Sapling’s Testimony’ give the reader immersion in sight, sound, smell, touch and the emotional state.

Those readers with a keen interest in form and language are well catered for in the collection. The conversational piece ‘My Name Is’ is one of my favourites. The poem ‘Immortalis’ has a genuine classic poetic feel utilising great language without pastiche or parody. We also have exquisite use of spacing and formatting in ‘Esmerelda’s Gaze’.

Fans of emotionally resonant poetry will love this book. Readers who like to interrogate the past and how it relates to the present will find this book rewarding. Poetics who enjoy defiance and resilience will enjoy this book. It’s a diamond.

Favourite Poem:

I’ve already mentioned ‘Nana’s Card Games’, and ‘My Name Is’. I will add a bumper seven additional poems that have stuck with me this week. ‘Melting’, ‘Thresholds’, ‘Zephyr’s Lost Winds’ ‘No More Anniversaries’, ‘Names’, ‘Crucifix Port’, and ‘Getting Pierced’.

To find out more about Carmella, click here.

To buy Chasms, click here.

You’ve found your way to the playlist. This week is another eclectic mix.

Massive Attack – Teardrop
Joni Mitchell – A Case of You
Radiohead – Nude
David Bowie – Subterraneans
Amy Winehouse – Back To Black
This Mortal Coil – Song to the Siren
Himzo Polovina – Emina
Tindersticks – Travelling Light
Charles Mingus – Stormy Weather
Sam Smith – Scars
Queen – These Are The Days of Our Lives


Before I Go…

Just want to say a huge congratulations to Dylan Thomas Prize Winner, Sasha Debevec-McKenney. A very deserved winner!


One More Thing…

If you’re into existential poetry, you should reach out to Evie @coastalpoet.bsky.social on BlueSky who is building a community of poets and poems around this. Also check out her #PoemsAloud hashtag and upload some spoken word pieces. I’ll be posting All Of Us Horses on there soon.


And Another…

The Wee Sparrow Poetry Press Ekphrastic Challenge 15 is open until the 7th June. Full details can be found here.


And Finally…

If you’re reading this on the morning of the 16th May you might still have time to get tickets for the launch of Hatchery by Beth Osmond.


Next Week’s Read

  • Title: The Way the Water Held Me
  • Poet: Catherine Redford

Take it easy and stay poetic, I’ll catch you next week.

Paul

The Book Bag: Cherry Blossom At Nightbreak by Rishi Dastidar

Welcome back to The Book Bag. I hope you’ve had a poetic week.


I’ve had a very busy week.

Work is ramping up ahead of Summer. I’m all settled into my new team and I’m learning more each day.

The allotment progresses more each passing day. Peas are now in their bed, turnips are planted, sunflowers are in the border. It won’t be long until we can start picking salad leaves.

On Sunday, I was at The Alnwick Garden to experience the Taihaku Cherry Orchard for the last day of its peak bloom. I took this week’s read to enjoy on the swings under the blossom. Coupled with the Japanese lanterns, chimes and traditional music, it was super relaxing.

After the Garden, I went to my parents for Sunday lunch. Cracking Roast Beef.

Sunday evening was the launch of Eleanor Holmes’s #Moth. It was an excellent launch with great readers, beautiful harp and a look behind the creation process from Sara who runs Ethel. Catch up with Eleanor’s Poetic Voice Feature here.

The running order has been finalised for the Unwhispered Legacy launch night, (subject to change). Join me and a stellar lineup of poets reading from the anthology, grab your tickets here.

On Friday, I attended an online workshop hosted by Sasha Debevec-McKenney, as part of Bristol’s Lyra Poetry Festival programme of events. It was a fantastic evening and has given me new techniques and a different perspective on approaching poems. We also read the work of 3 poets I wasn’t familiar with. I will now be buying more books!

This week, I’ve been reading;

Cherry Blossom At Nightbreak

  • Poet: Rishi Dastidar
  • Press: Nine Arches Press

Rishi’s poetry has real heart. The pieces ‘A leopard parses his concerns’ and ‘A man of theory on the Via Publica’ are two of my favourites that deal with relationships exceptionally well as is ‘Chromophilia (Song for B)’ and the title poem ‘Cherry Blossom At Nightbreak’ (another of my favourites). I’ll also add that ‘Charon the bus driver’ is a poem that made me happy.

Excerpt from Chromophilia

A spotlight is shone on the everyday. This is another of Rishi’s powers as a writer, to make poetry accessible and relatable. ‘Rake with telescopic handle’ and ‘Playing tag’ are both excellent examples of this. The poem ‘Knives raised in prayer’ takes us to the hallowed halls of Ikea, adding philosophical questions to the shelves.

There is plenty of humour in the book. ‘On bullshit jobs’ is one of my favourites because of its authenticity. On the following page is ‘Meanwhile in Ebisu’ a terrific example of satirical poetry. ‘I dreamed I stopped traffic’ is another chuckle worthy piece that makes great use of Pantone. I knew straightaway who would appreciate the poem.

‘Felt despairing, might delete later’ (one of my favourites), is a sad and strong assessment on the state of the current political situation. Its compact nature gives heightens the emotional language. ‘Credentialism’ is a smart poem that startled and stayed with me all week, especially the last line.

Excerpt from Felt despairing, might delete later

The style and form fans are well catered for in the collection. The use of couplets and line breaks in ‘Scapegoat-ish’ give it a tremendous rhythm. There is rhyme poetry in ‘Love’s Renewal’, a sprawling sequence poem named ‘the break of a wave’ which includes the clever ‘To his mistress moving to LA’ and a variety of styles. There is also free verse, a reverse ghazal, sonnets, an almost sonnet and more.

This is a book that will appeal to many readers for its heart, warmth, relatability and accessibility. Humour and hope can be found across the pages. Form is played with throughout so the technique lovers will adore this collection. I hadn’t even scratched the surface of how much I could write on this book, but I will say it’s one of the best collections I’ve read this year.

Favourite Poem:

I’ve already mentioned ‘A leopard parses his concerns’, ‘A man of theory on the Via Publica’, ‘Cherry Blossom At Nightbreak’, ‘On bullshit jobs’ and ‘Felt despairing, might delete later’. I’ll add another handful; ‘How to verb a sore heart’, ‘The late-style of my funk dancing’, ‘This Year My Only Strategy Was To Read Books About Strategy, To Work Out What To Do The Year After’, ‘Modern ruin’ and ‘Melted cockerel’. I could keep going.

Read more about Rishi here.

Buy Cherry Blossom At Nightbreak here.

If you’ve stayed for a playlist, then you’re in luck.

The Horrors – Still Life
Shakedown – At Night
Bill Withers – Ain’t No Sunshine
Kaiser Chiefs – Ruby
Tori Amos – Bouncing Off Clouds
Sheryl Crow – All I Wanna Do
Taylor Swift – Cardigan
Fatboy Slim – Praise You
John Coltrane – Naima
Bob Sinclar – World Hold On
Paolo Nutini – Cherry Blossom
Nightbreakers – Quarter to Midnight


Before I Go…

Last week I mentioned the Black Bough anthology in response to The Wasteland. ‘Shored Fragments’ is now able to purchase and the poets included are fantastic. Details here.

One More Thing…

I’ll be taking part in Poetry (In Brief) hosted by the delightful Rachel Turney on Saturday May 2nd. Full details and how to join can be found here.       

And Another…

If you’d like to be in the audience for The Book Bag: Open Mic Sessions, you can grab your tickets here. Sunday May 3rd. 7pm UK time.

And Finally…

No regular Book Bag next week but when I return, I’ll be sharing my thoughts on Hatchery by Elizabeth Osmond.


Take it easy and stay poetic, I’ll catch you soon.

Paul

The Book Bag: Neon Manila by Troy Cabida

Welcome back to The Book Bag. I hope you’ve had a poetic week.


It’s scary how fast the weeks are going by.

On Friday I attended an open mic and discussion held at Jesmond Library hosted by Len Pennie. I find my reading is becoming much better with each performance. I read Gravity Is A Force You Took For Granted and The Importance of Buoyancy. I also bought Len’s new book and got it signed.

Over at  the allotment, things are starting to flourish with greenery and the bulbs are blooming. I fitted a brassica cage ready for planting out in a few week’s time. It was still standing the following day despite the wind. 

I spent some time relaxing with my vinyls throughout the week. I keep returning to Coltrane by Coltrane. An exceptional album. The jazz of that period is quite simply magnificient.

Christine and I watched a terrific one woman show on YouTube. It was by Eden Sher who played the character Sue Heck in The Middle. The show was really moving, happy and sad. 

On top of that, I’ve been reading;

Neon Manila

  • Poet: Troy Cabida
  • Press: Nine Arches Press

The major strength in this book is the observation of different relationships. ‘My Daddy Baby’ examines dynamics and expectations in a relationship. In ‘Body Poem’, power dynamics are explored again but with a different perspective. One of my favourites is ‘Brighton Beach’ which combines excellent imagery and realistic, youthful personality. Another piece that caught my attention is ‘No One Wants What I Want’ which discusses an affair and the aftermath in a matter-of-fact way. ‘Symmetric’ was another of my favourite relationship pieces in the collection, exploring how an object can represent so much.

Excerpt from Body Poem

Several of the pieces use objects, often clothing, as metaphor which is something everybody does albeit mainly subconciously. The piece ‘Yellow Jacket I’ deals with desire and sensitivity all at once. The opening poem, ‘Order No: #UK65388’ is a smart piece on aspiration, it made me think of a friend I have who has an affinity for luxury watches and how they make him feel.

Discrimination is dealt with throughout in several ways. The poem ‘Race Riots Are Currently On The Way’ has humour but with an underlying unease. ‘You Walked Into School Wearing Your Mother’s Heels’ is a poem that shows resilience in the face of adversity. Resilience is a thread throughout the book and is done well and without cliche.

Excerpt from race riots are currently on the way.

There is a vulnerability and intimacy amongst the poems. ‘A Good Boy’, ‘Afterglow’ and ‘You (derogatory)’ are just a few examples of this. Throughout, it is heart on the sleeve poetry. I will say the piece ‘Thalassophobia’ shook me and I had to take a break from reading. Extremely powerful writing.

City life plays a key role in the book. The final piece ‘I Invoke The Spirit of Sarah Harris While Shopping For My Next Pair of Jeans’ is a piece that takes us on a tour of a London High Street and identity and the way the scene is set through vivid, relatable imagery you do become immersed in London life. Title poem ‘Neon Manila’ is a sprawling piece that covers multiple cities and countries looking at intimacy, vulnerability and culture with razor sharp insight.

Fans of form will savour this collection with a variety of different styles on display. ‘Black Turtleneck Sonnet’ (one of my favourites) is a multilayered piece that explores security, desire and control. The use lyrical language combined with couplets in ‘I Say I Am Myself’ gives the poem the right amount of space to breathe and move. There are excellent uses of space in ‘Slowed + Reverb’ and ‘Desiring’ plus many other pieces again giving the words room to make their mark.

This is an excellent collection of poetry that deals with many important themes in an inventive and clever way. Neon Manila will appeal to fans of punchy poetry with light and shade and a sense of vulnerability. If you read poetry for form, this collection will appeal. In my opinion Neon Manila is a tremendous book navigating modern life, keeping your head held high and finding out how to be yourself. Add it to your poetry library.

Favourite Poem:

I’ve already mentioned ‘Symmetric’ , ‘Black Turtleneck Sonnet’ and ‘Brighton Beach’. I could add so many but as of writing, I’ll stick to the handful that are in my mind right now. ‘Friends With Freudian Theory of Inversion’, ‘On Normativity’, ‘Both Wrists Silvered, Watch Me Deflect’, ‘Pearls In A Thumbprint Bowl’ and ‘Bone Cuff’.

You can read more about Troy Cabida here

Visit the Nine Arches Press Store and buy Neon Manila here

You’ve come this far, you may as well check out the playlist and what else is going on. This week’s mix is a quirky blend of old and new.

Sabrina Carpenter – Cappuccino 
ABBA- Angeleyes
Marilyn Monroe – Diamonds Are A Girl’s Best Friend 
Pharell Williams – Marilyn Monroe
Dua Lipa – Levitating
Troye Sivan – Bloom 
Deep Blue Something – Breakfast at Tiffany’s 
Audrey Hepburn – Moon River
Thelonious Monk – ‘Round Midnight
The Weeknd – Blinding Lights
Bruno Mars – Treasure 
Hilary Duff – All About You


Before I Go…

Tickets for the online celebration and launch of Unwhispered Legacy are free here. Join me and a host of incredible poets on Friday May 1st. The lineup is released this week. Keep an eye on social media.

One More Thing…

Black Bough Poetry’s eagerly anticipated Shored Fragments anthology is coming out very soon. Edited by Matthew MC Smith and Kitty Donnelly, the pieces have been written in response to The Wasteland by TS Eliot. Keep an eye on Black Bough social media for details.

And Another…

Dust Poetry are open for submissions until 17 May. There is no theme and submission guidelines can be found on their website. They are an incredible magazine and I would encourage you to send your best work.

And Finally…

I’m delighted to be able to share the exciting news about my inclusion on Wave 3 of The Whiskey Tree. I’m in such great company and really value the opportunity. I’ve already started working on my pieces and can’t wait to share them.


Next Week’s Read

  • Title: Cherry Blossom At Nightbreak
  • Poet: Rishi Dastidar

Take it easy and stay poetic, I’ll catch you next week.

Paul