The Book Bag: Neon Manila by Troy Cabida

Welcome back to The Book Bag. I hope you’ve had a poetic week.


It’s scary how fast the weeks are going by.

On Friday I attended an open mic and discussion held at Jesmond Library hosted by Len Pennie. I find my reading is becoming much better with each performance. I read Gravity Is A Force You Took For Granted and The Importance of Buoyancy. I also bought Len’s new book and got it signed.

Over at  the allotment, things are starting to flourish with greenery and the bulbs are blooming. I fitted a brassica cage ready for planting out in a few week’s time. It was still standing the following day despite the wind. 

I spent some time relaxing with my vinyls throughout the week. I keep returning to Coltrane by Coltrane. An exceptional album. The jazz of that period is quite simply magnificient.

Christine and I watched a terrific one woman show on YouTube. It was by Eden Sher who played the character Sue Heck in The Middle. The show was really moving, happy and sad. 

On top of that, I’ve been reading;

Neon Manila

  • Poet: Troy Cabida
  • Press: Nine Arches Press

The major strength in this book is the observation of different relationships. ‘My Daddy Baby’ examines dynamics and expectations in a relationship. In ‘Body Poem’, power dynamics are explored again but with a different perspective. One of my favourites is ‘Brighton Beach’ which combines excellent imagery and realistic, youthful personality. Another piece that caught my attention is ‘No One Wants What I Want’ which discusses an affair and the aftermath in a matter-of-fact way. ‘Symmetric’ was another of my favourite relationship pieces in the collection, exploring how an object can represent so much.

Excerpt from Body Poem

Several of the pieces use objects, often clothing, as metaphor which is something everybody does albeit mainly subconciously. The piece ‘Yellow Jacket I’ deals with desire and sensitivity all at once. The opening poem, ‘Order No: #UK65388’ is a smart piece on aspiration, it made me think of a friend I have who has an affinity for luxury watches and how they make him feel.

Discrimination is dealt with throughout in several ways. The poem ‘Race Riots Are Currently On The Way’ has humour but with an underlying unease. ‘You Walked Into School Wearing Your Mother’s Heels’ is a poem that shows resilience in the face of adversity. Resilience is a thread throughout the book and is done well and without cliche.

Excerpt from race riots are currently on the way.

There is a vulnerability and intimacy amongst the poems. ‘A Good Boy’, ‘Afterglow’ and ‘You (derogatory)’ are just a few examples of this. Throughout, it is heart on the sleeve poetry. I will say the piece ‘Thalassophobia’ shook me and I had to take a break from reading. Extremely powerful writing.

City life plays a key role in the book. The final piece ‘I Invoke The Spirit of Sarah Harris While Shopping For My Next Pair of Jeans’ is a piece that takes us on a tour of a London High Street and identity and the way the scene is set through vivid, relatable imagery you do become immersed in London life. Title poem ‘Neon Manila’ is a sprawling piece that covers multiple cities and countries looking at intimacy, vulnerability and culture with razor sharp insight.

Fans of form will savour this collection with a variety of different styles on display. ‘Black Turtleneck Sonnet’ (one of my favourites) is a multilayered piece that explores security, desire and control. The use lyrical language combined with couplets in ‘I Say I Am Myself’ gives the poem the right amount of space to breathe and move. There are excellent uses of space in ‘Slowed + Reverb’ and ‘Desiring’ plus many other pieces again giving the words room to make their mark.

This is an excellent collection of poetry that deals with many important themes in an inventive and clever way. Neon Manila will appeal to fans of punchy poetry with light and shade and a sense of vulnerability. If you read poetry for form, this collection will appeal. In my opinion Neon Manila is a tremendous book navigating modern life, keeping your head held high and finding out how to be yourself. Add it to your poetry library.

Favourite Poem:

I’ve already mentioned ‘Symmetric’ , ‘Black Turtleneck Sonnet’ and ‘Brighton Beach’. I could add so many but as of writing, I’ll stick to the handful that are in my mind right now. ‘Friends With Freudian Theory of Inversion’, ‘On Normativity’, ‘Both Wrists Silvered, Watch Me Deflect’, ‘Pearls In A Thumbprint Bowl’ and ‘Bone Cuff’.

You can read more about Troy Cabida here

Visit the Nine Arches Press Store and buy Neon Manila here

You’ve come this far, you may as well check out the playlist and what else is going on. This week’s mix is a quirky blend of old and new.

Sabrina Carpenter – Cappuccino 
ABBA- Angeleyes
Marilyn Monroe – Diamonds Are A Girl’s Best Friend 
Pharell Williams – Marilyn Monroe
Dua Lipa – Levitating
Troye Sivan – Bloom 
Deep Blue Something – Breakfast at Tiffany’s 
Audrey Hepburn – Moon River
Thelonious Monk – ‘Round Midnight
The Weeknd – Blinding Lights
Bruno Mars – Treasure 
Hilary Duff – All About You


Before I Go…

Tickets for the online celebration and launch of Unwhispered Legacy are free here. Join me and a host of incredible poets on Friday May 1st. The lineup is released this week. Keep an eye on social media.

One More Thing…

Black Bough Poetry’s eagerly anticipated Shored Fragments anthology is coming out very soon. Edited by Matthew MC Smith and Kitty Donnelly, the pieces have been written in response to The Wasteland by TS Eliot. Keep an eye on Black Bough social media for details.

And Another…

Dust Poetry are open for submissions until 17 May. There is no theme and submission guidelines can be found on their website. They are an incredible magazine and I would encourage you to send your best work.

And Finally…

I’m delighted to be able to share the exciting news about my inclusion on Wave 3 of The Whiskey Tree. I’m in such great company and really value the opportunity. I’ve already started working on my pieces and can’t wait to share them.


Next Week’s Read

  • Title: Cherry Blossom At Nightbreak
  • Poet: Rishi Dastidar

Take it easy and stay poetic, I’ll catch you next week.

Paul

The Book Bag: Birds | Humans | Machines | Dolphins by Genevieve Carver

Welcome back to The Book Bag. I hope you’ve had a poetic week.


What a busy week. It always feels that way when you go back to work after a break!

I was lucky enough to host imagist extravaganza TopTweetTuesday and read & hear some fantastic pieces. It’s a great platform to experiment with your poetry. I also took part in Fragment Fridays to get in some writing practice and woke up on Saturday to the news that my poem was joint 3rd with the incredible Regine Ebner this week. This weekend I dedicated to working on my own writing (and the Tyne-Wear derby). On top of that, I got a Forward prize nomination from Full House Literary! I’m still buzzing at this incredible news.

I’ve added a nightly reading hour to my schedule this week, to take a break from screens. The first book I read was Claire Keegan’s Small Things Like These and got engrossed, so I finished it in a sitting. An excellent book.

The finishing touches are being added to the anthology. I’m so excited to share it with the world on March 31st. The quality of writing is incredible, and the poets have been a joy to communicate and work with.

There’s been some sunshine and warmth in Newcastle. It makes a massive difference. At the allotment we have planted some vegetables and salad items. We’re also ready to pot on the tomatoes and have bought the grow bags ready for the greenhouse.

We also installed my bat box in the back garden. I hope we get some pipistrelles nesting.

On top of that, I’ve been reading;

Birds | Humans | Machines | Dolphins

  • Poet: Genevieve Carver
  • Press: Guillemot Press


I was sent a copy of Birds | Humans | Machines | Dolphins as a recommendation of something I would enjoy reading by Leia from Full House Literary. Leia was not wrong.

There is some exceptionally emotive poetry in the book that never strays across cliche ‘Concurrences’ is a perfect example of this. The piece ‘ROV’ (one of my favourites) triggered a physical emotional reaction. I had to take a reading break and have a tea. The closing piece ‘~whistle~’ is a triumph in showing multiple emotional states across a single poem.

Humour can be found across the pages. Two of my favourites ‘Please Do Not Anthropomorphise The Animals’ and ‘~buzz~’ are great examples. In fact I’ve felt like the closing to ‘~buzz~’ on a few occasions the past couple of weeks!

Excerpt from ~buzz~

We are treated to wonderful imagery through sound and movement. In the pieces ‘~echolocation click~’, ‘Beatrice’ and ‘Ringing a Fulmar’ readers are immersed in vivid scenes with added feeling of motion.

Form and style is played with excellently throughout the book. ‘Hazard Risk Assessment’ is an excellent multi-poem spread across grid paper. It is little touches like this that can elevate books. In the Machines section, the font is amended to a retro robotic style. I read some of the pieces in this section in an internal voice resembling an android. This font coupled with the formatting of ‘C-Pod’ (one of my favourites) gave it a real sense of a tickertape.

This is an exceptional book that nature lovers will thoroughly enjoy. Fans of evocative , emotionally engaged poetry will appreciate the layered and clever writing throughout. Poetics who admire playfulness with form and a hybrid style will love this book. This is a marvellous read.

Favourite Poem:

I’ve already mentioned ‘ROV’, ‘C-Pod’, ‘Please Do Not Anthropomorphise The Animals’ and ‘~buzz~’. I’ll also add ‘Hydrophone’, ‘Postcards From A Fulmar’ and ‘Field Log’. Every poem in this is top class.

To read more about Genevieve Carver click here.

If you want to buy Birds | Humans | Machines | Dolphins, click here.

You’ve stayed for the playlist? This week’s eclectic mix was a mix of pop, rock and dance…

Passenger – Two Beautiful Birds
The Foo Fighters – Learn To Fly
Imagine Dragons – On Top Of The World
Florence & The Machine – Dog Days Are Over
James Blunt – Postcards
Shed Seven – Dolphin
Beyoncé – Single Ladies
10CC – I’m Not In Love
Adele – Rolling In The Deep
Elephant Micah – Field Notes
Deepest Blue – Deepest Blue
Ultra Naté – Free


Before I Go…

Have you kept up with Vikki C’s Poetic Voice feature? Her final poem was added on World Poetry Day on Saturday. Read the feature in full here.

One More Thing…

The Last Saturday Poets is coming up on 28th March 2026. Details and tickets of the stellar lineup can be found here.

And Another…

Have you checked out Rebecca Leek’s podcast, The Ditty Bag yet? It’s available to listen to via her Substack here. It’s a great way to discover poets and poems, new and old.

And Finally…

Eleanor Holmes online launch of #Moth is in April. I’m delighted to have been asked to be part of the reading line up which includes some fascinating poets including Sarah Raybould and Elizabeth Osmond. Full details and tickets are available here.


Next Week’s Read

  • Title: After Party
  • Poet: Dean Browne

Take it easy and stay poetic, I’ll catch you next week.

Paul