Poetry

The Book Bag: A Wide River Divides Us By Gill Barr

Welcome back to The Book Bag. I hope you’ve had a poetic week.

It’s been a productive week in the allotment with strawberry runners being planted, the fruit cage being finalised and the cold frame started. Things are taking shape.

Last Sunday we went to Wallington, a National Trust property not far from Morpeth. It was a perfect day for a long autumn walk. We also got to take in the photography exhibition dotted throughout the East Wood. I may write an ekphrastic piece about one of the images. The below, I took on my phone. I think it sums up autumn in Northumberland.

My copy of Anarkiss Vol.9 arrived (I have 3 pieces in the zine) and it is filled with excellent art, poetry and essays. I’ve also done some planning and sent off a couple of submissions. I am thoroughly loving reading for Frazzled Lit, and have been lucky to read some terrific poetry.

At work, I’ve had some big news (good) and the intense spell has trailed off into a busy period of identifying and implementing improvements. I also got some really lovely feedback from a colleague that almost had me welling up.

On top of that, I’ve been reading;

A Wide River Divides Us

  • Poet: Gill Barr
  • Press: Cinnamon Press


I first heard poems from this collection at an open mic over zoom and was captivated by Gill’s reading and the subject matter.

A Wide River Divides Us is a debut collection that examines the history of Derry/Londonderry during The Troubles in Northern Ireland. It is a compelling witness statement told from a narrative perspective beginning in childhood through to adulthood.  

Although there is danger in these pages, notably in pieces including ‘Soldier Doll’, ‘Why We Leave Cook Terrace’ and ‘Coleraine’ there is also a huge degree of resilience and community. This can be seen in the poems ‘Isolated Shooting Incident’ and ‘Keep Walking’. The retelling of events is handled is authentic, you can feel every word and emotion. You get all of Gill’s experience through vivid imagery that at times is startling including in ‘Claudy’ and ‘A Dance Lesson’ compared to ‘Delay’ which feels softer edged.

Nature is a recurring theme throughout the book and feels like both escape, outlet and sanctuary. The poem ‘Port Na-Garley’ is an exemplary piece describing a heron. In ‘On An Evening Gently Falling’ (one of my favourites) we are treated to rainfall described eloquently, almost dreamlike. The pieces ‘Talking To Each Other’ and ‘Line In The Sand’ are further examples of this.

A standout of this book apart from the wonderful poems is the language that Gill uses. The pieces, ‘Palmer’s Moon’ and ‘Veduta’ are perfect examples of this. We are also provided with a variety of different styles from the sprawling ‘They Came Out The Mist’ to the couplet structured ‘Magilligan Point’. The italicisation in ‘Privilege’ makes the piece feel important, immediate (read the notes on this poem at the end of the book).

I could write so much about this book because it is outstanding. The fact it is a debut is even more impressive.

This collection will appeal to readers who appreciate compelling witness accounts, eloquent language, effective imagery and human connection and poems that make you react and reflect. This is a book that provides a testimony of events from a city caught up in violent, political turmoil and is an important book especially with current climates. A Wide River Divides Us is in my top 10 of reads this year. This is striking poetry.

I’m not the only one who thinks so either. Gill collaborated with a young film-maker to to make a poem-film of the title poem and it has just been shortlisted for 13th O’Bheal International Poem-Film Festival in Cork taking place in November, details here.

Favourite Poem:

I’ve already mentioned ‘On An Evening Gently Falling’. Here are another seven in no particular order (I could name a good few more); ‘Lough Shore Nocturne’ ‘Seaside, Seesaws and Other Oscillations’, ‘Diogenes Got Up And Walked’, ‘A Wide River Divides Us’, ‘Mixed Signals’, ‘Night Promenade’ and ‘The Road To Shroove’.

To read more about Gill, click here.

To buy A Wide River Divides Us, click here.

Oh, you want a playlist to read along with the collection? Here you go…

Foy Vance – Guiding Light
U2 – Bad
The Undertones – It’s Going To Happen
Enya – Evening Falls
Paul Desmond – Emily
Dave Brubeck Quartet – Strange Meadow Lark
Kenny Wheeler – Kind Folk
CMAT – Stay For Something
Christy Moore – North & South Of The River
The Corrs – Runaway
The Cranberries – Dreams

Before I Go…

Did you catch my callout for Christmas Gifting Ideas? Help me put together a post that will help poetics with their gift giving while boosting poets and presses at the same time. Details here.

One More Thing…

Black Bough are hosting an open mic next Sunday. Always a warm and welcoming environment to share poems. Details here.

And Another…

The Book Bag Open Mic Sessions: Session 1 is on Sunday 9th November. Share your polished gems or roughcoat coals. The line up so far is excellent. Details of tickets here. Be quick, there’s only a handful of reader spots left. Or you can come along and enjoy being a member of the audience.

And Another…

The Eat The Storms Podcast has returned for a new season, episode 1 dropped last Sunday and is a great listen. Available where you get your pods, details here.

And Finally…

Remember, Frazzled Lit are still accepting works throughout October, for free. Read the submission guidelines here and send your best work.

Next Week’s Read

  • Title: Wonderful
  • Poet: Harry Baker

Take it easy and stay poetic, I’ll catch you next week.

Paul

The Book Bag: Concealed Pockets – The Christmas List Call Out

With the festive season fast approaching, I thought it would be a good idea to compile a list of poetry collections, pamphlets and anthologies that would make excellent Christmas gifts.

To do that, I’m calling on the book bag readers to offer some advice to each other.

 What I would like from you is the title, author or editor and press with a couple of lines as to why you think a particular book will make an excellent Christmas gift as well as a photograph of the cover.

I will then select and compile these into a list and share at the end of November. This is a great way to boost poets and presses alike as well as giving gift ideas to your fellow poetics.

To quote Shelley ‘Poetry lifts the veil from the hidden beauty of the world, and makes familiar objects be as if they were not familiar.’ Why would you not want to share that?

How to send the information: Send an email with the subject ‘The Christmas List’ to thebookbag25@gmail.com before 23:59 on 21st November 2025.

Please attach the image of the cover as png or jpg file formats.

I Ho Ho Hope to read your recommendations soon!

Stay Poetic,

Paul

Featured Image: Photo by freestocks on Unsplash

The Book Bag: Somewhere A Tree Waits For An Angel Or A Butterfly

Welcome back to The Book Bag. I hope you’ve had a poetic week.

It has been a busy week this week. I think all my hard work and schedule has caught up as my department starts to quieten down.

We planted the onion and shallot sets at the allotment and have been able to dig over the fruit cage thoroughly. All the raised beds are now ready for use. We’ve planted green manure too. Progress is steady.

My nephew turned 18 and we celebrated with food and drinks in Northumberland. I can’t believe where that time has gone.

In terms of poetry, I’ve had a great week. I found out that I was shortlisted in the Katrina Collins Poetry Prize and will appear in the anthology alongside incredible poets which is a huge honour. Congratulations to everyone else who was nominated and to the winners.

Also Write Here, Right Now happened on Thursday and was excellent as always. Did every attendee get played in on my saxophone? Yes! Several of the pieces I have worked on in group or had feedback on have been sent out for submissions and results are positive and I’m adding value to my writing.

I’ve also been able to read some pieces for Frazzled Lit Issue 4. There is lots of talent out there.

On top of that, I’ve been reading;

Somewhere a Tree Waits For An Angel Or A Butterfly

  • Poet: Eileen Carney Hulme
  • Press: Hedgehog Press

I’ve been lucky enough to speak with Eileen over social media for some time. Eileen has been very supportive of my own poetry and is a big advocate of The Book Bag. I’ve also shared pages in anthologies with Eileen and always look forward to reading her work. She is by all accounts lovely and sent me a handwritten note giving me the background behind the book.

Somewhere a Tree Waits For An Angel Or A Butterfly was published in 2024 by Hedgehog Press after winning the inaugural Crimson Spine competition. And, after reading the poems inside it’s hardly surprising.

Eileen’s strength is creating tremendous imagery that elevate the poems from the page into the mind. Pieces including ‘Choosing A Stone’ and ‘A Smudge of Love’ are great examples of this.

Place and memory play an integral role in the pamphlet. The poems ‘Reverberations’ and ‘Illusions’ (one of my favourites) both take readers to the beach evoking different emotions through lived experience. The piece ‘Afterlife’ is incredibly moving and full of love.

Eileen’s use of language is precise and sharp yet simultaneously soft and delicate. ‘Sweet Time’ demonstrates this impeccably with the form used adding an extra dimension to the piece. The piece ‘Damp Shaped Us’ is another exemplary poem.

This is a pamphlet that will appeal to readers who appreciate the journey that love can take you on. The imagery and language in this book is beautiful and poems last long in the heart, especially ‘Lovers’ and ‘Afterlife’. It would make a beautiful gift.

Favourite poem: I’ve already mentioned ‘Illusions’ and ‘Afterlife’. Here are another five; ‘Somewhere A Tree Waits For An Angel Or A Butterfly’, ‘Lovers’, ‘What’s Left Behind’, ‘If You Could Go Anywhere’ and ‘When You Wake’.

To find out more about Eileen click here.

To buy Somewhere A Tree Waits For An Angel Or A Butterfly, send Eileen a message here.

You didn’t think I’d forget the playlist did you? This is my eclectic selection to accompany the pamphlet:

Tina Turner – What’s Love Got To Do With It?
Sixpence None the Richer – Kiss Me
Semisonic – Secret Smile
Scarlet – Independent Lovesong
Queen – Somebody To Love
Chris Rea – The Beach
Oasis – Wonderwall
Sam Smith – Latch
James Blunt – Goodbye My Lover

Before I Go…

On Monday I’ll be sharing another piece from this month’s Poetic Voice, Carson Wolfe. If you haven’t read the feature yet, click here and bookmark.

One More Thing…

Louise Longson’s Last Saturday Poets is on 25th October 2025 and the line up is incredible. Tickets are free and the event starts at 7pm. Details here.

And Another…

With Christmas coming soon, I was thinking of doing a post about potential poetry book gifts people could buy for loved ones, friends and even for their work ‘Secret Santa’ however as something a little different, I’d love input from you all. I’ll be posting a link to the full details next weekend as to how you can be involved.

And Finally…

Atrium Poetry is open for a week long submission window from Monday 13th October 2025. Details will be available on their website from Monday. Send your work (read the submission guidelines first!).

Next Week’s Read

  • Title: A Wide River Divides Us
  • Poet: Gill Barr

Take it easy and stay poetic, I’ll catch you next week.

Paul

The Book Bag: Why I Wear My Past To Work by Chris Campbell

Welcome back to The Book Bag. I hope you’ve had a poetic week.

I’ve probably asked this about 437 times this week, but how is it October?

I’ve had quite the rollercoaster this week. Sunday morning was spent at the allotment, making a bulb lasagne. Hopefully come spring, we’ll have some lovely pastels flowering. Fingers crossed! 

I also saw Newcastle get (undeservedly) beat by Arsenal. But then we bounced back with a Champions League win. It was also the 2nd anniversary of getting Brody. We celebrated by giving him toys and treats. Unfortunately, the weather put pay to our planned walk. 

Wednesday was the launch of this month’s Poetic Voice feature and I’m thrilled that Carson agreed to take part. If you’ve not read the first part already, catch up here. Thursday was National Poetry Day on the theme of ‘Play’. I shared a small piece on social media. I’ve also added it here with my TopTweetTuesday entry.

Also, this week I’ve sent off several submissions and had some good news. You may remember my poem ‘Laundry Day’ was accepted and published by Dust Poetry Magazine (link here), well I’m beside myself, because it has been nominated for a Best Of The Net award. I’d like to say thanks to Dust for trusting in my work and congratulations to all other nominees. 

On top of that, I’ve been reading;

Why I Wear My Past To Work

  • Poet: Chris Campbell
  • Press: Parlyaree  Press


This is Chris Campbell’s second appearance in The Book Bag. He is back with a bang in Why I Wear My Past To Work, a collection that spans recovery from illness, family, relationships and life. There is definite evolution in this collection from All Island, No Sea. I was lucky to be part of his online launch a couple of weeks ago. If you get a chance to hear him read, take it. His voice carries real weight and emotion. 

One of Chris’ main strengths is his sharp observation. He can immerse a reader in a scene or situation that feels relatable rather than forced. Poems such as ‘Five Schoolboys Pick Pyracantha’, ‘The Sea Steals Our Picnic Blanket’, ‘The Meadow, Dugdale Avenue, 1993’ and ‘Revellers Howl In The Fine Hours’ excel in this vein. The piece ‘Cold Crooks By This Fire Pit’ made me think of ‘Hippy Green’ behind Old Eldon Square in Newcastle.

The pieces relating to Chris’s recovery are at times harrowing and at times funny. ‘Today I Can’t Speak’ is compact yet compelling. ‘In The Queue At Bristol Royal Infirmary’ is a darkly funny piece that is so relatable to anyone who’s spent time in an A&E and one of my favourites. Poems including ‘After Leaving The Ward’ and ‘Holed Up After Hunting For A Gift’ also highlight Chris’ spirit, resilience and the journey he has been on. In these pieces we are seeing Chris at his most vulnerable.

The pieces in this collection which address his relationship with his family are delicate and authentic. Poems including ‘Day Trip, 2000’, ‘You Are Here, Grandad, In This Mute Playpark’ (which left me in a flood of tears) and ‘Bin Workers Wake You’ are all perfect examples of this across a scale of emotion. ‘My Son Grows as I Regress’ is a tremendously thoughtful and moving piece.

Aside from family relationships, Chris connects with everyone, he is after all a genuinely decent human being. I must the poem ‘I Drown During An Awards Do As The Queen Dies’ where Chris confronts a former soldier who is spouting bigoted diatribe. The piece ‘How This Cuban Shop Serves Pachanga’ is a lovely poem on community full of sensory imagery. We need more Chris Campbell’s in the world.


In terms of form, Chris uses a variety throughout including couplets in ‘A Helping of Sand After University’, compared to the flow of single-versed ‘Our Date Night Will Be Ponchos In January’. In ‘I am The Man I Wanted To Be’ we are shown some neat, intricate internal rhyme along with honest introspection. I really enjoyed some of the surprising line breaks throughout the book especially in ‘There Is A Mortuary On The Horizon’.

This collection will appeal to poetry lovers who appreciate heartfelt poems from a masculine perspective that don’t border on cliche. Lovers of vivid imagery and sharp observations will appreciate the pieces throughout this book. These are poems to return to time and again, it feels like having a conversation with a friend who relishes family, friends and the small (and big) things in life. Also if you’re looking for gift inspiration for the forthcoming festivities, Why I Wear My Past to Work would make a great Christmas present. 

Favourite Poem:

I have several favourites in this collection. I’ve already mentioned ‘In The Queue At Bristol Royal Infirmary’ so I’ll stick to another five as I’m writing. ‘Who Gave Our Kid Glitter Stickers’, ‘You Play The Violin On Your Mum’s Birthday’, ‘Shove Your 3-for-2 Flyer’, ‘Let Me Breathe Apricots’ and ‘Why I Wear My Past To Work’. I must also give a special mention to ‘Egg Lamp’s Verdict’. Oh and ‘Ode To The Pruning Woman Eaten by Vines’ is pretty special too.

To learn more about Chris, click here. 

To buy Why I Wear My Past To Work click here.

And of course, it wouldn’t be The Book Bag without a playlist to accompany Chris’s collection, so here’s an eclectic selection to pair with the book…

Joni Mitchell – Both Sides Now
Florence & The Machine – Dog Days Are Over
Oasis – Songbird
Massive Attack – Unfinished Sympathy
Miles Davis – Blue In Green
Yusuf Islam – Father & Son
Bob Marley & The Wailers – Three Little Birds
The Verve – Sonnet
Bill Withers – Lean On Me
Elton John – I’m Still Standing
Mumford & Sons – After The Storm
Portishead – Only You
Muddy Waters – Got My Mojo Working
Ralph Vaughan Williams – The Lark Ascending

Before I Go…

Frazzled Lit are open for free submissions throughout October. I am excited and honoured to be part of the reading panel which also includes Louise Machen and Val Roberts. Details and Guidelines here. Send your best work.

One More Thing…

Broken Spine Arts have another thematic callout for submissions, this time for gothic poetry to be included in ‘The Havisham Steps’ anthology. Details here.

And Another…

If you want to partake in a supportive and friendly open mic, The Book Bag Open Sessions: Session 1 is on Sunday 9th November between 7 & 9pm (UK Time), via zoom. Share polished gems or roughcut coals. Or sit back and enjoy as an audience member. Details here.

And Finally…

Mark Anthony Owen’s excellent ‘After…’ journal is open for submissions throughout October looking for ekphrastic / after pieces. Full details here.

Next Week’s Read

  • Title: Somewhere A Tree Waits For An Angel Or A Butterfly
  • Poet: Eileen Carney Hulme

Take it easy and stay poetic, I’ll catch you next week.

Paul

Poems for National Poetry Day 2025

It’s been a while since I added poems to the website, currently most are shared on social media or sent out for submissions before posting on my site however that will change as I want to spend time on my website, to cultivate and maybe archive some of my older pieces. That will come in the winter months when my job isn’t so busy.

With that in mind, I thought I’d share two recent poems, from this week. National Poetry Day was on Thursday 2nd October and the theme this year was ‘play’. So i thought I’d partake and write a piece specifically for the day itself. I was already writing a different piece for the incredible weekly TopTweetTuesday poetry share on Twitter/X of the same theme, but using a ‘nonet’ nonetheless. If you’ve read much of my work, you’ll know I don’t do much writing in determined forms but I am always looking to improve my practise.

These are the two pieces which I’ve shared this week.

Poem 1: Written for TopTweetTuesday using ‘Play’ as the theme, with ‘nonet’ chosen for form.

Entertaining Brody 

Claret-tip ivory arcing claws 
signifying his excitement— 
tongue barrel-rolls between barks, 
snout snozzleshifts in air, 
conker marble eyes 
dart to his ball, 
legs scramble. 
Wait. Wait. 
Fetch.

Poem 2: Written specifically for National Poetry Day 2025.

Breathless 

Slightest drift of fingertips 
glance across pearl—
seal with soft-stroke lips,
press, 

blow.

I hope you enjoyed these small pieces.

Stay Poetic,
Paul

Featured Image by Ben Hershey on Unsplash

The Book Bag: Poetic Voices – October 2025

Can someone tell me how it is October already. Autumn colours arrived early this year and it seems like the nights are drawing in quicker each day. And with a new month, comes a new Poetic Voice to feature as part of The Book Bag: Poetic Voices.

This feature aims to platform and showcase exemplary work from writers I admire across the poetic landscape and runs concurrently with the regular weekly episodes of The Book Bag where I’ll still be sharing thoughts on pamphlets or collections I’ve read through the week.

This month, I am thrilled to announce that our Poetic Voice this month is the prize-winning, super-talented, Carson Wolfe.

Carson Wolfe is a Mancunian poet and Grand Prize Winner of The Disquiet Literary Program 2024. They will soon graduate with an MFA from The Manchester Writing School, and are currently finishing their first novel. Their poetry has appeared with Poetry Magazine, The Rumpus, The Common, and Rattle. Their new chapbook Coin Laundry at Midnight is forthcoming with Button Poetry in spring 2026. 

www.carsonwolfe.co.uk

@vincentvanbutch

I first read Carson’s work in The North and Northern Gravy and was blown away by their work, then I read more and more. Fast forward to now and I am so happy that Carson accepted my invitation.

I’ll be sharing a few pieces from Carson over the month. Kicking off with ‘While Wishing She Was Dancing To Kate Bush’ originally published in the Best New Poets Anthology 2024.

A little later than planned, here’s poem 2 from the exceptional Carson Wolfe. First appearing in POETRY Magazine July/August 2025, this is SILICON VALLEY, IN THE BACKSEAT OF A TESLA.

Here is the 3rd poem from Carson. Originally published in The Baltimore Review, this is ‘Strange Baby’.

STRANGE BABY

He locked his doors—
the guy who braked

at my outstretched thumb. 
His name was Froggy. He drove 

in the opposite direction
to Georgetown, 

is the temperature ok? 
he turned the radio dial, 

what music do you like? 
A white crab 

pearled in his headlights, 
he got out, knelt 

on its shell. I could have 
run at that point, 

but his car was air 
conditioned, I had nowhere 

to be. He pulled a rope 
from his back pocket, turned  

its pincers into its own face 
and bound them there. 

I’ll cook you dinner, he said, 
and lumped the salted moon 

onto my lap. It squirmed 
against my thighs, 

this strange baby, looking 
to me for a mother.

I don’t eat animals, I said. 
It’s not an animal, he drove 

on in the stink of rockpool 
fizz. The island only has 

one road, I told myself 
we’d loop round eventually. 

He pulled into a hotel, 
abandoned mid-construction. 

Bare cement, windows gaping 
like mouths. I wouldn’t touch 

the crab, was grateful 
when he tossed it

in the back. I stepped out 
into the evening shrill 

of insects. Dizzied 
by the delicate racket 

of wings rubbed together
—he took out a knife 

and cleared a path for me 
to reach a secret beach. 

The sunset is pretty, like you, 
he said. Like me? I smiled.

Like you, he said, 
down on one knee.

To pre-order Carson’s forthcoming chapbook, you can do so here. I can’t wait for its release. An early birthday present to me from me!

Paul

The Book Bag: Drench Me In Silver by Saraswati Nagpal

Welcome back to The Book Bag. I hope you’ve had a poetic week.

What a week. Work has been non-stop. The days have been rolling into each other, and I wake up thinking it’s the wrong day! I did relax watching Newcastle progress in the League Cup this week too. Hopefully we can be back to back winners. Fingers crossed. Another good thing that happened was speaking to Matthew Smith live from my back garden.

The weather hasn’t been great. However, a break meant last Sunday started with a trip to the allotment to plant some garlic and herbs. Also, I dug out a fruit cage which was hard work plus the radishes we planted a couple of weeks ago are showing good signs of growth. I got over on Saturday too and covered some ground with woodchip. We also planned next steps and focus as we want to prepare for spring planting before the winter frosts.

On the poetry front, I’ve submitted two pieces, added a micro review to Pascale Petit’s Poetic Voice feature and shared the first date for The Book Bag: Open Mic Sessions, with spaces starting to be taken up. The first session will take place on Sunday 9th November at 7pm via zoom.  I was also in the audience of the Winged Moon’s online launch of Biophilia which was top class excellent readings. I must mention Jai Michelle’s passion for The Winged Moon, it really shone through when discussing the project.

On top of that, I’ve been reading;

Cover Art “Daughter of the Moon” by Swapna Maini

Drench Me In Silver

  • Poet: Saraswati Nagpal
  • Press: Black Bough Poetry

I first encountered Saraswati’s poetry on TopTweetTuesday and was captivated by her beautiful language and consistent considered pieces. Then, I heard Saraswati read at a Black Bough zoom open mic, and found her reading to be even more captivating, almost hypnotic. If you have the chance to hear Saraswati read, take it.

Drench Me in Silver is Saraswati’s debut collection and has been nominated for both the Forward Prize and the Tagore Prize by Black Bough Poetry. The book is separated into sections relating to rain. Staring with Memories of Rain going through to Petrichor.

One of Saraswati’s major strengths is her ability to weave passion and sensuousness into her pieces that the reader becomes invested quickly. Poems including ‘Drench Me In Silver’ and ‘Cape Winters’ feel sumptuous and luxurious. As does the poem ‘Night’s Lapis Dome’ . I mentioned that poem during my conversation with Matthew Smith, it stayed with me.

As someone who has read continuously read work by Saraswati almost weekly via the magnificent poetry jamboree, TopTweetTuesday, it is no surprise that emotion underpins a lot of the pieces in a clever, layered way. ‘Toward Joy’, ‘Intezaar’ and ‘Sawaan Serenade’ are perfect displays of this. One piece that stands out is ‘Of Whales and Love’. If you’ve read my Book Bag entry on Helen Laycock’s Elemental, you will know I have a soft spot for whale poetry.

Fans of mythology are well catered for. ‘Persephone’s Lament’, ‘Women In Myths Are Tumbling Out Of My Closet’, ‘Forge’ and are all superb poems. ‘Orison For The Lost’ is another marvel discussing mythology with terrific imagery and language choices. You will notice in the collection that Saraswati has a great understanding of different pantheons and figureheads.

The importance of place is a constant theme throughout. ‘Daughter of Sindh’ is an incredible piece that discusses the usurping of heritage and lands Mountbatten and his role as the Last Viceroy but also the intimate personal repercussions and consequences following the aftermath felt by Saraswati and her family. ‘Dusk by Ganga’ is a lyrical piece that is soft and filled with hope. I must mention the sound patterning from the recurring r’s at the opening of the piece. They add a wonderful cadence to the poem. ‘Beside a Rose-Merchant, Kashmir’ is a tender piece that immerses you in a Kashmir market with sensory delight.

Form and space are played with throughout the book. We have the powerful tercet ‘Descendant’. ‘Songs of Chaos’ plays with the space on the page focusing on the precise wording. We have ‘after poetry’ including the lush ‘Prayer for Monsoon’. Another thing to add is Saraswati’s approach to free verse. It is expert as is her precise, beautiful language.

This collection will appeal to readers who want poetry with deep connections, immaculate language and vivid imagery. Appreciators of mythology will love this book. This is poetry that embraces you and guides you through time and place, the kind you want to get lost in a while and linger. I’ll be buying another copy as a present for somebody for Christmas.

Favourite Poem:

I’ve already mentioned ‘Daughter of Sindh’ and ‘Of Whales and Love’. There are so many to choose from, but I will stick to another handful as I write this. ‘Hero’, ‘Denouement in Citrine’, ‘Last Daughter’, ‘Spear-child’ and ‘Night Wanderers’. Oh, I’ll also mention ‘Diwali’s Velvety Nights’ and ‘Night’s Lapis Dome’ .

To learn more about Saraswati, click here

To buy Drench Me in Silver, click here

And what would The Book Bag be without a playlist. So here is a mix to listen to while reading a beautiful collection.

Anuv Jain – Mishri
Dream Note – Waqt Ki Baatein
When Chai Met Toast – Ocean Tide
Mali – Horoscope
Maren Morris – The Bones
Billie Myers – Kiss The Rain
Eurythmics – Here Comes The Rain Again
Planetopia – Catch and Release
Anumita Nadesan – Khwaab
Bombay Jayashiri – Zara Zara
Anoushka Shankar – Beloved
Tyrone Wells – Days I Will Remember

Before I Go…

I said at the start, if you get the chance to hear Saraswati reading, take it… Well, Saraswati and Black Bough are holding an online launch for Drench Me In Silver on Sunday 5th October. Tickets & Details here.

One More Thing…

I mentioned sharing the details of The Book Bag: Open Mic Sessions. Join me for an evening of sharing polished gems and roughcut coals in a supportive environment. Details and tickets can be found here.

And Another…

It’s almost the end of September. On Wednesday, The Book Bag: Poetic Voice for October will be unveiled. Another exceptional talent and award-winner…

While you wait, why not check out Pascale’s September feature here which now has a playlist and micro-review of Beast.

And Finally…

It’s National Poetry Day this week. This year the theme is ‘play’. I’ll be sharing a poem on Thursday on social media in response. Are you planning on participating in National Poetry Day? Let me know in the comments.

Next Week’s Read

  • Title: Why I Wear My Past To Work
  • Poet: Chris Campbell

Take it easy and stay poetic, I’ll catch you next week.

Paul

The Book Bag: This Wilderness & Other Concerns by Martin Kennedy Yates

Welcome back to The Book Bag. I hope you’ve had a poetic week.

Does anybody else feel the weeks are getting busier? Work is at its peak currently and I’m loving overcoming the challenges it’s presenting. Unfortunately, because the of the weather I haven’t been able to get to the allotment, however I have been able to relax to some incredible jazz and soul and the playlist further down the page, I even dabbled with my sax a little. Newcastle were unlucky not to get a point from the Barcelona game but it was Barcelona. Poetry-wise I’ve drafted some pieces, done some editing, started a submission piece and decided to host an open mic. More details on the open mic coming soon.

On top of that, I’ve been reading;

This Wilderness & Other Concerns

  • Poet: Martin Kennedy Yates
  • Press: Broken Spine Arts


Martin Kennedy Yates blew my mind at an open mic the first time I heard his reading of a Scousenlish poem, I became a big fan immediately. That was a while ago and I’ve kept up with his writing ever since. When he was announced as the winner of Broken Spine Art’s collection contest I was on tenterhooks for his debut release. And here we are. This Wilderness & Other Concerns is a book that showcases Martin’s ability, knowledge and interests outstandingly. The sections are This Wilderness which is a response to The Wasteland a hundred years on, Other Concerns which take a view on place to politics and, Scousenlish.

Martin is deft at peeling back the mirage of city life revealing and exploring what lies beneath, both the dark and the funny of which there is plenty in in this book. This is portrayed in the opening poem ‘A Time For Dying’ where we are taken on a tour of the city and bump into Kevin King Carpet-fitter of Kidderminster and his passion for Caliban. This continues in ‘All The World’s A Stage’ and throughout the collection.


One of Martin’s strengths is his knowledge of and use of language to expand the poem from the page into immersive imagery that you can cling to. ‘/Pylon\ Shed’ is a terrific poem of sketching out a memory on to page for readers to share in the scene through multi-sensory detail. Another piece ‘Fabric’, compares contrasting scenes immensely.


Emotion is etched into the poems in this book on a wide spectrum. ‘Overheard On The Wind’ is a tour de force in emotive poetry where the reader is treated to a whole host of feelings across the pages. I was breathless after reading it and was an incredible closing poem to section one. ‘Martyr’ is a fantastic compact piece that teems with bite.

I’ve spoken about Martin’s use of language above, however, I must give a second shoutout for the full Scousenlish (described as Martin’s alter ego) section of the book which inspired by Sir Gawain and the Green Knight. Read it aloud with measured cadence and the understanding of the words will fall seamlessly in your mind.

So I’ve talked about language twice. Martin is also a master of shaping and use of space to focus the reader on the message and narrative of his poetry. ‘The Murmurations’ is (one of my favourite pieces) an excellent display of the use of space and shaping to focus the reader but also give movement to the poem.

This is a book with broad appeal. Incredible language, wonderful imagery and an emotional undercurrent flow like the river through the city. Readers who want a modern take on The Wasteland will love this book. This is a collection that will make you pause and reflect throughout. A tremendous debut, I look forward to seeing what Martin does next. Buy it now, it will make a great literary Christmas gift.

Favourite Poem:
I’ve already mentioned The Murmurations. Let’s add another five if I use the entire ‘Scousenlish’ section to count as one. Then there’s ‘Pathos’, ‘Hope’’, ‘Drowned Rats and Sinking Ships’ and ‘Devotee’.

Buy This Wilderness & Other Concerns here or reach out to Martin on on social media to buy a signed copy direct which comes with a bookmark containing a bonus poem which is what I did.

Want a playlist to read along to? Well here’s an eclectic selection to accompany the book;


The Who – My Generation
Black Sabbath – Paranoid
Beverley Knight – Greatest Day
UB40 – Can’t Help Falling In Love
Kelly & Ozzy Osbourne – Changes
Duran Duran – Hungry Like The Wolf
The Streets – Has It Come To This?
Vivaldi – L’Inverno
Dexys Midnight Runners – Come On Eileen
The Moody Blues – I’m Just A Singer
Boney M – Rivers of Babylon
Blur – This Is A Low

Before I Go…

Have you read Pascale Petit’s feature yet? Read it here and keep your eyes peeled for a mini review of Beast in this coming week.

One More Thing…

The Winged Moon are hosting an online launch for Biophilia on Friday 26 September 2025 at 6pm (UK time). The lineup looks incredible. Email thewingedmoonmagazine@gmail.com to grab a ticket.

And Another…

Broken Spine Arts have launched a new initiative being spearheaded by Karen Pierce Gonzalez ( Author of Down River With Li Po) called #NotJustPretty and kicks off with a 90 minute literary open mic and showcase aimed at amplifying women’s voices. Details of the initiative can be found here.

And Finally…

Marcelle Newbold shared details of a competition she is co-judging on Instagram this week with some excellent prizes on offer. Walking ‘In The Dark’ closes on Monday 20th October 2025. Details here.

Next Week’s Read

  • Title: Drench Me In Silver
  • Poet: Saraswati Nagpal

Take it easy and stay poetic, I’ll catch you next week.

Paul

The Book Bag: Husband Material Vol II: Twenty-Seven Addresses by D. L. Husband

Welcome back to The Book Bag. I hope you’ve had a poetic week.

I’ve had an incredibly busy week. Work is constant now but that’s what I like. I feel satisfied every day when I’m finished because I know I’ve worked hard and contributed to the team and company.

I attended an excellent open mic last Sunday evening, you can read about it here, on Friday I read at the launch of Chris Campbell’s new book ‘Why I Wear My Past To Work’ which I feel truly grateful to have been invited to take part. Somehow, I wrote a couple of good pieces too (in my opinion anyway).

At the allotment, preparing for winter in full flow. We had a ton of compost delivered on Saturday. Getting it from the drop off bay, into wheelbarrows then to our plot was exhausting.

On top of that, I’ve been reading;

Husband Material Vol II: Twenty-Seven Addresses

  • Poet: D. L. Husband
  • Press: Hidden Hand Press

Husband Material Vol II: Twenty-Seven Addresses is my first time reading D.L. ‘Dan’ Husband in a collection. He featured on the same episode of BBC Upload with me hosted by the fantastic Emma Millen. I’ve watched his Instagram of performances of spoken word at fringe events and elsewhere. I also checked out some of his published work online and I’m a fan. It’s always great to share work from Northeast poets. Let’s jump into the collection.

There is power in Dan’s poems, sometimes understated and restrained sometimes unflinching. The pieces ‘Demolition Man’ and ‘Reaper Man’ are two examples of how to add impact but in various ways. I must also mention the title poem from the collection ‘Twenty-Seven Addresses’ which is a hybrid of prose and sequence that feels like a worthwhile mandate. I relate to this piece in so many ways and is one of my favourite pieces.

Every piece in this collection teems with emotion. It deals with key themes that working-class men deal with daily: , identity, challenging stereotypes and perceptions, personal struggles with addiction and standing out from the crowd you belong to. ‘Buffet’ is a terrific example of this and uses visual spacing that mimics the movement he describes. ‘Give A What?’ is a direct address to the reader and pulls no punches. This is meaningful poetry.

I like pop culture references in poetry when they make sense which is something Dan uses, keeping the work relatable. In ‘Ghostbusters’ we are treated to a cameo from Gozer, Venkman and Spengler. In ‘3D Printed Dinosaur Bones’, Mothra and Godzilla make an appearance. One thing he doesn’t do is use a reference for the sake of it or overuse.

Imagery weaves its way through the collection. This is demonstrated in ‘The Moon Watches On’ where we are hurtled through space and time to understand what the moon has observed since it came into being.

Dan’s skill in spoken word composition is evident in the rhyming patterns and structured shifts in the pieces. Read them aloud. Another key detail is the intricate and clever wordplay he uses. The piece ‘Blameless Blaggard’ is a great demonstration of this.

This is a collection for poetry fans who want to be confronted with truth, sometimes brutal. Fans of spoken word, clever wordplay and rhyme will enjoy this book. Readers who want to explore recovery through words, this will appeal to you. A deep, dark intimate book. I’ll be grabbing a copy of volume I very soon.

Keep up with Dan here.

To buy Husband Material Vol II: Twenty-Seven Addresses, click here.

Favourite Poem:

This week I’ll go for five. I’ve already mentioned ‘Twenty-Seven Addresses’ but the following four have also stuck in my head. ‘Border War’, ‘The Old Beast’, ‘Fairy Trials’ and ‘Ananke’.


Oh, and here’s this week’s playlist, you didn’t think I’d forget:

Little Roy – Lithium
Massive Attack – Teardrop
Oasis – Cigarettes and Alcohol
Maximo Park – Risk to Exist
Eels – Novocaine For The Soul
Tom Petty – Free Fallin’
Underworld – Born Slippy
Fatboy Slim – Weapon Of Choice
Sam Fender – Play God
Robbie Williams – Better Man

Before I Go…

Did you catch the details of The Book Bag X Write Here, Right Now submission window and guidelines? A terrific chance to get published and potentially be nominated for awards including BOTN, Pushcart & Forward. Details here.

One More Thing…

Alan Parry will be on hosting duties for another Broken Spine Arts ‘Write The Night’ workshop on 28 September 2025. I have attended this in the past and found it extremely useful and highly recommend it. Details here.

And Another…

If you’ve been following The Book Bag for a while, you will know that I am a massive fan of Helen Laycock. She is this month’s poet on Black Bough’s Silver Branch feature. Read it here.

And Finally…

Have you had chance to catch up with this month’s Poetic Voice? Pascale Petit has shared a piece from Beast. Keep an eye on social media for a further addition to the feature…

Next Week’s Read

  • Title: This Wilderness & Other Concerns
  • Poet: Martin Kennedy Yates

Take it easy and stay poetic, I’ll catch you next week.

Paul

The Book Bag: Concealed Pockets – Reflections on The Weekend’s Open Mic

So on Sunday (7th September) I attended an open mic via zoom held by Black Bough Poetry. They are always excellent events and Biok Bag alumni Matthew MC Smith is always excellent on hosting duties. This time he was joined by the fabulous Polly Oliver as co-host and this was possibly one of the best Black Bough zoom open mic’s I’ve attended.

There were over 20 international poets all with various styles, subjects and voices giving the night a special feeling of anticipation as to what would come next. I read Who We Are in the encore section, my most confident reading of this piece so far. But enough about me…

Every poet brought something different and I was hypnotised by some, brought to tears by one poet, some debuts which were excellent also.

Here’s a recap of some of my favourite performances and why…

First off, I’ll mention Evie Carlyn, reading an important piece recently featured in the prestigious Madrid Review. It entranced the room and was delivered perfectly- both in pitch and pace.

Paul Connolly, who I’ve connected with over on BlueSky, has a theatrical performance style that really lent itself to the poems he read. His diction and intonation led me to make a request he read the entire Lord of The Rings trilogy on audiobook for me.

Rob McKain who I’ve had the pleasure of meeting and hearing live in Neath 2024. His voice carried every bit of emotion in the poem he recited, the sorrowful quality was deepened by his immense accent. If he and Paul Connolly were to record a radio play it would be a phenomenal success.

Photo Credit: Matthew MC Smith

I was very impressed by Elizabeth Fevyer making her open mic debut. Her pitch and pace and choice of work was tremendous and there were no signs of nerves. I’m looking forward to hearing her read more.

Lauren Parker is a terrific performance poet. She has a real understanding of rhythm and flow, when to change tone and pace. It helps that her poems are always class and suit her conversational style.

Victoria Spires’ open mic and performance confidence continues to improve and impress. Vic is in the next wave of Iamb and when you get the chance, hear her read. Her poetry is prize-winning and of excellent quality. Also buy Soi-Meme.

It was a treat to hear Martin Kennedy Yates reading from his new book, (I’m looking forward to it arriving). His voice carries so much emotion making his reading mesmerising. Martins new book, This Wilderness and Other Concerns, will be making an appearance in The Book Bag soon…

At one point, I had to turn my camera off because Louise Longson read such a beautiful piece written for her friend Nick that I cried. I felt every single word and emotion. It reminded me of my Uncle.

Sarah Raybould’s poetry is top notch. As is her reading style, very composed and deliberate in her reading. I really enjoyed hearing her read and look forward to hearing more of her reading.

Daniel Hinds has a wonderful accent. He is from the North East after all. He read some of his poetry from New Famous Phrases and he always sounds so good. A pro.

Wren Wood is an impeccable performer. I really appreciated the movement and tone shifts which can be hard to portray on a zoom open mic. Exceptional poems too.

Barnaby Harsent read extremely well. But he always does. Poised and precise in his delivery that draws you in. Catch him on Iamb too.

I could go on and on because I enjoyed every single reading for different reasons. But these are the thoughts I’m having today.

A lot of readers are on the Iamb platform spearheaded by the excellent Mark Anthony Owen whose performances too were top class. His poems carry an economy of language that when combined with his tone gives real gravitas.

If you liked this quick piece let me know and I may do another at the next open mic I attend. Maybe in the future I might host one too?

Let me know your thoughts.

If you want to hear me read with a stellar line up to launch Chris Campbell’s new collection on Friday visit Parlyaree Press here for zoom tickets

Stay Poetic,

Paul.