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The Book Bag: Fourth & Walnut by Jeremy Over

Welcome back to The Book Bag. I hope you’ve had a poetic week.

I’ve a terrific week this week. Let’s start with poetry. The inaugural Book Bag: Open Mic Session was a success, and I feel so grateful for everyone who attended and shared such excellent poetry. Also, your comments and Session Two is happening on January 11th. Tickets go on sale soon and will be announced on social media first.

A further poem from Latch by this month’s Poetic Voice, Rebecca Goss was added to her feature and can be read here. Weir is a tremendous piece and I feel lucky to be in a position where poets trust me to share their work.

I’ve had an acceptance (woop!). I’ve written a couple of pieces and submitted to a couple of different journals. I received proofs of two print anthologies which I have work in (more details of those coming soon).

I also read at The Black Bough Open Mic as a Featured Poet which was an honour and privilege. I’m feeling more confident and comfortable with readings compared to last year. I’ll be focusing on adding more readings to my Instagram.

I’ve also been able to work at the allotment and I’m so happy with the progress we’ve made so far. We harvested some radishes and roasted them to go in a winter salad with walnuts, beetroot and goat cheese. Delicious and simple.

On top of that, I’ve been reading;

Fourth & Walnut

  • Poet: Jeremy Over
  • Press: Carcanet Poetry

Fourth & Walnut caught my eye as its so different to anything else I’ve read for The Book Bag. This is experimental poetry at its best.

For starters, the last twenty odd pages is a blackout poem using an illustrated children’s book. Even its title ‘Yes & Yes’ derives from the original book. Surreal, subversive, clever and witty.

The book begins with the piece ‘Advice to a Young Poet’ where the writer name checks poets from Rilke to Blake and Thomas Merton delivering some tongue-in-cheek wisdom to the reader.

Thomas Merton has a large influence on the collection, appearing in several works, the book taking its name from Merton’s epiphany in Kentucky.

There are more recent pop culture references in ‘Reading In The Rain: An Essay’ which has a nod to one of my top 5 favourite active weather people, Tomasz Schafernaker and media legend Angela Ripon. In this piece there are poems within poems.

‘In The Middle of Things’ is an imagery-rich two-part piece that teems with emotional resonance and heart. A poem that makes you stop and reflect. Then return to read it again and again.

‘Equinox In A Box’ is a sprawling piece that takes place over a day could be a pamphlet in itself. Making use of multiple styles, images and wordplay. It makes the reader slow down, pause and engage with the piece. It was the perfect read after a challenging workday.

A key strength in the book is it’s shifts. Not just in theme and format but in rhythm and pace. Read the sequence on snowdrops within ‘Reading In The Rain: An Essay’. Sublime.

Nature is integral to the collection. Whether it be the animal kingdom from turtles to rhino to cows and birds, plant kingdom from lichen to cowslips or weather patterns. The range used is epic in scale but all works to produce great results.

Fourth & Walnut will appeal to all the surrealist lovers, fans of experimental contemporary writing and poetry readers looking to read something different. This is whimsical poetry, the type that makes you smile, ponder and relish.

Favourite Poem:

‘Yes &Yes’, ‘In The Middle Of Things’, ‘Reading In The Rain: An Essay’ including or the sub poems and ‘Equinox In A Box’.

Learn more about Jeremy Over here.

To buy Fourth & Walnut, click here.

You want a quirky playlist to companion this book? Well here it is…

Mika – Rain
Norah Jones – Come Away With Me
Etta James – A Sunday Kind of Love
Bob Dylan – Blowin’ In The Wind
John Coltrane – Equinox
Gregory Porter – Be Good
Smashing Pumpkins – Rhinoceros
Massive Attack – Teardrop
Radiohead – Present Tense
Arthur Alligood – 4th & Walnut

Before I Go…

There’s less than a week to submit ideas for the Christmas List which will be released on the last Sunday in November in place of the regular Book Bag. It’s a perfect way to share ideas and inspiration and boost your favourite poets and presses in time for the festive period. I’ve had some super entries so far. Full details here.

One More Thing…

I’m delighted to say that I am reading at Louise Longson’s Last Saturday Poets on Saturday 29th November. It’s a fantastic line-up and audience tickets are free and can be booked here.

And Another…

The submission window opens in 2 weeks for the Unwhispered Legacy anthology. Full details here.

And Finally…

Write Here, Right Now is taking place on Thursday (the final one of 2025). Our small writing group is a source of inspiration, knowledge and support. If you’re interested in joining, you can drop me a message. We are inclusive, supportive and anti-bigotry.

Next Week’s Read

  • Title: TBD
  • Poet: TBD

Take it easy and stay poetic, I’ll catch you next week.

Paul

The Book Bag: Concealed Pockets – Reflections on The Weekend’s Open Mic

So on Sunday (7th September) I attended an open mic via zoom held by Black Bough Poetry. They are always excellent events and Biok Bag alumni Matthew MC Smith is always excellent on hosting duties. This time he was joined by the fabulous Polly Oliver as co-host and this was possibly one of the best Black Bough zoom open mic’s I’ve attended.

There were over 20 international poets all with various styles, subjects and voices giving the night a special feeling of anticipation as to what would come next. I read Who We Are in the encore section, my most confident reading of this piece so far. But enough about me…

Every poet brought something different and I was hypnotised by some, brought to tears by one poet, some debuts which were excellent also.

Here’s a recap of some of my favourite performances and why…

First off, I’ll mention Evie Carlyn, reading an important piece recently featured in the prestigious Madrid Review. It entranced the room and was delivered perfectly- both in pitch and pace.

Paul Connolly, who I’ve connected with over on BlueSky, has a theatrical performance style that really lent itself to the poems he read. His diction and intonation led me to make a request he read the entire Lord of The Rings trilogy on audiobook for me.

Rob McKain who I’ve had the pleasure of meeting and hearing live in Neath 2024. His voice carried every bit of emotion in the poem he recited, the sorrowful quality was deepened by his immense accent. If he and Paul Connolly were to record a radio play it would be a phenomenal success.

Photo Credit: Matthew MC Smith

I was very impressed by Elizabeth Fevyer making her open mic debut. Her pitch and pace and choice of work was tremendous and there were no signs of nerves. I’m looking forward to hearing her read more.

Lauren Parker is a terrific performance poet. She has a real understanding of rhythm and flow, when to change tone and pace. It helps that her poems are always class and suit her conversational style.

Victoria Spires’ open mic and performance confidence continues to improve and impress. Vic is in the next wave of Iamb and when you get the chance, hear her read. Her poetry is prize-winning and of excellent quality. Also buy Soi-Meme.

It was a treat to hear Martin Kennedy Yates reading from his new book, (I’m looking forward to it arriving). His voice carries so much emotion making his reading mesmerising. Martins new book, This Wilderness and Other Concerns, will be making an appearance in The Book Bag soon…

At one point, I had to turn my camera off because Louise Longson read such a beautiful piece written for her friend Nick that I cried. I felt every single word and emotion. It reminded me of my Uncle.

Sarah Raybould’s poetry is top notch. As is her reading style, very composed and deliberate in her reading. I really enjoyed hearing her read and look forward to hearing more of her reading.

Daniel Hinds has a wonderful accent. He is from the North East after all. He read some of his poetry from New Famous Phrases and he always sounds so good. A pro.

Wren Wood is an impeccable performer. I really appreciated the movement and tone shifts which can be hard to portray on a zoom open mic. Exceptional poems too.

Barnaby Harsent read extremely well. But he always does. Poised and precise in his delivery that draws you in. Catch him on Iamb too.

I could go on and on because I enjoyed every single reading for different reasons. But these are the thoughts I’m having today.

A lot of readers are on the Iamb platform spearheaded by the excellent Mark Anthony Owen whose performances too were top class. His poems carry an economy of language that when combined with his tone gives real gravitas.

If you liked this quick piece let me know and I may do another at the next open mic I attend. Maybe in the future I might host one too?

Let me know your thoughts.

If you want to hear me read with a stellar line up to launch Chris Campbell’s new collection on Friday visit Parlyaree Press here for zoom tickets

Stay Poetic,

Paul.